Las Vegas Cinderella - Comments

Ok, so I definitely liked the Cinderella reference; it was cute and gave made Biznasty seem sweet...that's not a normal word used to describe him hahaha. There were some grammatical errors/missing words but obviously it did not deter me from reading lol.
I liked the club they worked at and their fake names too. The one thing I was upset about was that you didn't go in depth about their little "game" they played with the boys first night they met, I feel like that would have been hilarious...but I also understand because it might have made the story way longer than you wanted (seeing as how I have that issue by elaborating way too much, I can respect that you know when to cut it off lol)
Anyways, I plan to put up the winners within the next couple hours so you can check that out on the contest page! :)

Wait, that last one is Italian? Mebbe?

Wait, that last one is Italian? Mebbe?

Encore! Brava! I have exhausted my 'French'!

Great story I agree with @H_DIZZLE a spin off would be great :-)

Loved this!! kinda want a spin off to see what happens, but thats just me

cute story!! can't wait for the next chapter

Love this! Super light and fun.

Great update, I can't wait to see val's reaction when she sees Paul again :-) :-)

Great update, I can't wait to see val's reaction when she sees Paul again :-) :-) gr

I like this, update soon :-)