This story is amazing. I really enjoy the plot, and I fell in love with Ona from the very beginning. I fell almost obsessed when I read this - wondering about the fierce hate between the North and the South, whether or not Ona will make it as Queen, and if something could go wrong. Your story is amazing. Its comparable to Tolkien or Martin. It reminds me of The Lord of the Rings with a little Game of Thrones twist. Fun, really. Keep writing :) I'm hoping to see new chapters soon!
This story is amazing. I really enjoy the plot, and I fell in love with Ona from the very beginning. I fell almost obsessed when I read this - wondering about the fierce hate between the North and the South, whether or not Ona will make it as Queen, and if something could go wrong. Your story is amazing. Its comparable to Tolkien or Martin. It reminds me of The Lord of the Rings with a little Game of Thrones twist. Fun, really. Keep writing :) I'm hoping to see new chapters soon!
Absolutely no problem! Its all honesty.