Dying Embers - Comments

the first chapter literally made me cry :,(

Hoping you update soon cause I really want to know what's going to happen next.

@ January Rose
Oh, coz I had thought it was fast lol :) well in that case can keep things the way they are and I know :(

Oh no!
That seriously sucks for Misty.

I don't think you're going to fast and I like the pace the story is at now.

I loved the letter, so sweet (But if you could send me one that is a bit more readable, I would really appreciate it )
Feel really bad for Misty, she's in a really hard spot. Plus, how is the going to make the others believe her without James suspecting anything?

@ January Rose
yeah :(

@ ebony_goddess
Oh...

@ January Rose
Yeah, remember that time I was telling you about my writers block, this is why. Gonna have to think long and hard about how this is going to end.

What a jerk! I knew he was selling something from the kids, but I had no idea what. No wonder he is so nice to pregnant women, they give him the most money.
Poor Rita, Misty and everyone else in that place.
Misty has to help everyone else, there is no way they are going to survive if she doesn't!

@ January Rose
Yeah, Misty is going to uncover everything soon :) the story is ending so all the secrets are starting to come out.

@ tedted5
Aww, thank you. That comment made me feel so...good :)

James is one weird f**k .... Lol this story is great and the plot is amazing! This story just makes me want to keep reading and excited for the next update

Nooo, not Justin! How could James be so cruel. Gravely ill, pull-ease.
I like Rita, and I hope she survives her child birth and I hope her child is okay.
James is getting more and more weird. I hope Misty uncovers the secret soon!

@ LegallyBlue
Thank you :) next update is tomorrow, so you'll have to wait x

This is a great story. Update soon.

@ January Rose
Yeah, his smart like that. Charming too :)

Like the new character Justin. He seems to know James is up to something and wants something done about it. I like it.

@ ebony_goddess
I liked the other one, but this one is good too.

@ January Rose
Lol :) Yeah, my friend said the other one was a little too long :/

Oh, you changed the title.
Cool

@ ebony_goddess
Impatiently waiting for chapter 11 then!
Can't wait!