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  • a mimosa pudica

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    Something's starting to begin..... tehe
    October 25th, 2013 at 08:15am
  • cuppycake

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    So happy you updated! This story is so addicting.
    October 25th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • cuppycake

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    So happy you updated! This story is so addicting.
    October 25th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • darkaly

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    I'm so happy about this being updatedawesrdtj!!asfzg
    October 25th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • mrsbellaray

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    This is so good! I wish there was an update any time soon! Xx
    September 2nd, 2013 at 06:08pm
  • a mimosa pudica

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    Even if you're working on something. DON'T STOP WRITING THIS. I still adore it and I can't wait for what's going to happen next!
    June 26th, 2013 at 02:44pm
  • Flower_Child

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    This story is lovely! I loved every chapter. It's cool how you start the beginning of the chapters, you write so well! Update again soon! :)
    June 22nd, 2013 at 03:09am
  • a mimosa pudica

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    This story is getting pretty heated and I'm glad to be here to read it.

    I think you're writing is incredible. It fits the character very well and I admire her somehow. Zara is a fragile thing, but she's strong in so many ways I still cannot fathom.

    Sullivan is being a part of this story a lot better now. I'm wondering what will become of the both of them. Surely, he'll be more than just a math tutor to Zara. I guess you've given me something to look forward to.

    As for him, will Kenneth be included in the following chapters? I don't want him to ruin anything. If he will be a part of the story, I suggest you add in more details about him; if he's married, does he have kids, what's his job now and stuff.

    Other than that, I truly love your writing and I hope to see a lot more of it soon!
    May 31st, 2013 at 07:01am
  • n. josten

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    oooh~ I like this a lot. I'm slightly worried about Kenneth but I really like Sullivan so far. Now gimme update. ♡
    May 30th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • cuppycake

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    I love this so much.
    The writing style is different and I really like it.
    I wonder what if Kenneth will get even scarier.
    May 27th, 2013 at 10:32pm
  • DarianSharkbait

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    May 24th, 2013 at 05:20am
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    May 24th, 2013 at 05:20am
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    May 24th, 2013 at 05:20am
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    May 24th, 2013 at 05:20am
  • DarianSharkbait

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    This is really good. I'm enjoying the writing style, keep it up! :)

    Oh, No, so it posted my comment four times >.< Sorry about that!
    May 24th, 2013 at 05:20am