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  • f50ShadesofFrackedUp

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    Yay update Mr. Green
    July 8th, 2014 at 09:40pm
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    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PICK THIS UP AGAIN OMG
    February 5th, 2014 at 09:07am
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    PLEASE UPDATE THIS
    December 9th, 2013 at 02:21am
  • Wishes_to_wonderland

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    When are you going to update again? It says you havnt updated in 3 months :c
    August 23rd, 2013 at 07:11pm
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    oh my god update pLEASE i am going to cry this is perfect and just how you portrayed all the characters and omg matty b and max and oLI b ye youre perfect
    July 18th, 2013 at 08:35pm
  • Anne Ashes

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    When are you going to updade? ;-;
    July 10th, 2013 at 03:07am
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    This is super cute so far can't wait to see what happens next
    June 24th, 2013 at 02:05am
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    I can't wait to see where this goes! Keep updating!
    June 20th, 2013 at 02:35am
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    i love this! please update!! xx
    June 17th, 2013 at 01:08am
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    This is beautiful! I love it. Your characters are so well written- Alex and jack are my favourites though Max has some awesome phrases. I also /love/ how you've made Oli come across, simply awesome.
    June 14th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • Joli Fransykes

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    Thank you :D

    Chapter four has been started and it only gets better! Thank you for commenting.
    May 31st, 2013 at 07:25pm
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    How did I just find this!? It's brilliant! Update soon!!
    May 31st, 2013 at 05:34pm
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    @ wowfairy13
    It was, I was close to tears. I know Josh was having his whole "I fucked one of my best guy friends" freak out, but it was too funny. Max's whole character in this is great as he only serves to wind Josh up even further.
    May 28th, 2013 at 07:19am
  • wowfairy13

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    esachicadealla:
    this is fucking hilairous. You get all the awards for how your are characterizing Oli, okay? Every time he teases Josh it's perfect. Eheheheheh, Josh can't deny his feelings for long~
    Lol at the whole convo with Max too... the "groped by Satan" part was hilarious!
    May 28th, 2013 at 06:48am
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    this is fucking hilairous. You get all the awards for how your are characterizing Oli, okay? Every time he teases Josh it's perfect. Eheheheheh, Josh can't deny his feelings for long~
    May 27th, 2013 at 04:33am
  • niekot

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    please, leave Oli's character like he is now, he's so... full of sweet sexyness, i can feel the tension he makes.
    May 27th, 2013 at 03:01am
  • Anne Ashes

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    e.e It's getting interesting,I like that
    May 25th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • SamsJam

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    Gotta love Oli tho.
    May 25th, 2013 at 10:53am
  • wowfairy13

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    Awesome chapter I like the title you picked for it. Oli is such a cakecockblock lol :)
    May 25th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • Maybach

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    Creative story title. Update soon.
    May 24th, 2013 at 02:30pm
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