Fifty Shades of Joli - Comments

Yay update

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PICK THIS UP AGAIN OMG

PLEASE UPDATE THIS

When are you going to update again? It says you havnt updated in 3 months :c

oh my god update pLEASE i am going to cry this is perfect and just how you portrayed all the characters and omg matty b and max and oLI b ye youre perfect

When are you going to updade? ;-;

This is super cute so far can't wait to see what happens next

I can't wait to see where this goes! Keep updating!

i love this! please update!! xx

This is beautiful! I love it. Your characters are so well written- Alex and jack are my favourites though Max has some awesome phrases. I also /love/ how you've made Oli come across, simply awesome.

Thank you :D

Chapter four has been started and it only gets better! Thank you for commenting.

How did I just find this!? It's brilliant! Update soon!!

@ wowfairy13
It was, I was close to tears. I know Josh was having his whole "I fucked one of my best guy friends" freak out, but it was too funny. Max's whole character in this is great as he only serves to wind Josh up even further.

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this is fucking hilairous. You get all the awards for how your are characterizing Oli, okay? Every time he teases Josh it's perfect. Eheheheheh, Josh can't deny his feelings for long~

Lol at the whole convo with Max too... the "groped by Satan" part was hilarious!

this is fucking hilairous. You get all the awards for how your are characterizing Oli, okay? Every time he teases Josh it's perfect. Eheheheheh, Josh can't deny his feelings for long~

please, leave Oli's character like he is now, he's so... full of sweet sexyness, i can feel the tension he makes.

e.e It's getting interesting,I like that

Gotta love Oli tho.

Awesome chapter I like the title you picked for it. Oli is such a cakecockblock lol :)

Creative story title. Update soon.