Friends... Right? - Comments

Great story, please continue !!!!!

this story is AMAZING!!!! i just feel bad for damien but he started it so he shouldve thought of the consequences before pushing her

Caleb better take care of her or I'm going to go in there and punch him in the face! :)

Caleb better take care of her or I'm going to go in there and punch him in the face! :)

I had written out a big long complaint filled with tears and my computer had decided to be stupid, so now im not going to bother trying to rewrite it since i wrote it yesterday and just leave it to your imagination. Anywho i am upset that they are together and i think Damien is a sweet heart underneath all that douche bag. I almost cried reading this and I feel for Dami <3

I was wanting her to diss Caleb since he wants to pretend, but I've noticed that both continue to repeatedly make her cry. She she make them both earn her love, for whoever can prove that they do so more. Just listening to Caleb say these things to her when all he does is order her around and he doesn't notice. If he actually cared he would stop for a moment and notice how much of an ass he's being >-> But I love it nonetheless I was hoping to keep going on forever xD But I can't wait for the update >O<

Great story!!

Out of Caleb and Damien. Looks wise, Damien. Definitely Damien. I like the mystery in Caleb though, I can never tell if he actually even likes her or not. I'm leaning more towards only wanting sex with her, but deep inside I'm hoping that really he's just a nice guy, that's "damaged". I really cant wait to read the next chapter. All in all, I much prefer Damien. He's an arse, but he's also really kind, and i don't know just something about him warms my heart. How he's so protective is just so cute!!

Please write more :) Congratulations on your engagement by the way :) best of luck

I love Margerie! Great character :)

Damien is an ass and i love it so much!!

In Chapter 9 it says "I brushed my hair, changed back into my sweat pants and shirt, then met Damien in the entrance room. He stood there shaking his head." I'm sure it's supposed to say Caleb. Just helping out :) Damien is my favorite character by the way. I feel that he can be shaped well, he seems dark and mysterious and a little slutty if i do say so myself.

Caleb and Nikki ftw. Elizabeth and Damien can go hook up or something

I hope she ends up with Caleb and that he actually feels something genuine for her. Damien had his chance and now that someone else has come along he wants her? -_-

So wait does Caleb actually like her or is it just lust?

I feel so special! :D twas a good chapter indeed :)

@ LonelyInASeaOfStars
Why thank you hun, I guess people are silent. But I appreciate your comment, very much. It was unexpected, I will work on the next chapter for you. ^__^ I don't want the story to be guessable though.

I guess you just have a lot of silent readers xD but I for one am not. I quite enjoy this story actually. Nikki is my favorite character, she's shy and awkward and now that Caleb is trying to change her I can think of many ways this story will go :D all of which I like. Keep up the good writing ;)