The last chapter was really good, you just need to read through it, for example the sentance when Riah says Zacky's there didn't quite work. Can't wait for the sequal!
I still dont think she should go away! She should move in with Zacky....she needs to stop worrying about causing tension between Zacky and Jimmy...it's already there...now she needs to focus on her and Zack's relationship and their baby!