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  • January Rose

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    This is SO good!!! I love how you have put your own twist on the Harry potter series, it's quite interesting to read. This is set in the Deathly Hallows, a while after The Golden Trio are captured? And only Ron and Harry make it out?
    The way you have written the 2 main characters -Hermione and Draco - are really amazing. Thy act just like they would in the Harry Potter books.
    Please update this soon, I would love to know what happens! :) Cool
    September 2nd, 2014 at 04:26pm
  • NicVivHow

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    Another chapter would be amazing, Im dying to know how this story ends out!
    August 17th, 2014 at 06:17pm
  • Loomaloo

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    Please update! Loving this story!
    July 16th, 2014 at 10:30am
  • tetys20

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    OMG this is really good!!! Can't wait to read more.. Please update!!! ^^
    June 15th, 2014 at 12:21pm
  • theycallmeloki

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    @ Loomaloo
    Thank you so much for your review! I'm so happy you like it C: I'm actually already writing the fourth chapter right now, but I don't want to pump the chapters out as soon as I write them, so I'm thinking every week or so, but I should be updating more often. Thank you!
    April 26th, 2014 at 03:01am
  • Loomaloo

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    Hey! Yay! I'm so glad you're still working on this one!
    I like the new direction you've taken this, it has more substance :D huge fan of this ! Please please please keep up the awesome awesome work!
    April 26th, 2014 at 02:58am
  • Loomaloo

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    Hey, is this story still being updated?
    February 19th, 2014 at 01:42am
  • waddup-its-claudia

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    This story is so dark, but I love that stuff! It's beautiful, and I love your writing. You're an amazing author, keep it up! Love this story c:
    July 10th, 2013 at 05:12am
  • Blue-Eyed-Beauty!

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    wow! I've said it once, i'll say it again, i LOVE this story! I think your writing it amazingly! And .. ya nothing else i can ask for.
    Also, i've never meet you but through your writting (though a bit dark) i can tell you are a wounder of a person. Stay strong Wonder girl :)
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:19am
  • Jenia

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    I enjoyed.
    July 3rd, 2013 at 03:37am
  • waddup-its-claudia

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    MY HEART JUST DID A FLIP! YOU UPDATED YAY <3
    July 3rd, 2013 at 12:00am
  • Kittyn96

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    I really really like your story :) I don't have any suggestions cuz it's great the way it is :) Can't wait for an update
    June 5th, 2013 at 07:12pm
  • Blue-Eyed-Beauty!

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    @theycallmeloki
    Glad i could help! I've read a lot of dramione story's before, some with similar plot lines too, but this one has really got my attention.. Happy to help in any way i can :)
    P.S: I've been telling my dramoine otp friends about your story and they seem to love the idea as well.
    May 26th, 2013 at 09:49pm
  • theycallmeloki

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    @ Blue-Eyed-Beauty!
    Your suggestion is fantastic! I was planning on focusing more on Lucius, but your idea is definitely one I'll try to put in. Thank you so much!
    May 26th, 2013 at 03:07pm
  • Blue-Eyed-Beauty!

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    I think i found my new favourite dramione story... I really like your idea. Also, i see that your kind of showing Draco as a mirrored image so- to- speak of his father. And-just a suggestion, feel free to completely burn this idea- i think you should write more on Lucius and Narcissa relationship. That way we get a better feel of emotions and can see the similarities/ differences between the two "couples". Though, it's obviously a dramione story, not a dramoine and Lucissa story. Um.... that's really the only thing i think could make this story better. Your a great writer and you have an amazing story line... Keep it up! It's great:)
    May 26th, 2013 at 08:06am