I Drank Your Milkshake - Comments

Hey.
Nice, quick easy read. The epilogue is cute.
I like how Teagan ended up being Andrew's sister, that was a nice twist. The title had me intrigued from the start, as I went the whole time wondering where this said milkshake was hahaha.
Anyway, keep on writing. This was an enjoyable read. :)

Hey.
Nice, quick easy read. The epilogue is cute.
I like how Teagan ended up being Andrew's sister, that was a nice twist. The title had me intrigued from the start, as I went the whole time wondering where this said milkshake was hahaha.
Anyway, keep on writing. This was an enjoyable read. :)

@ Wispy
Thank you! :)

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So this was a nice story. I like your style of writing, it's very easy for me to picture whats going on in my head which is a challenging thing to find on here (you have no idea -.-") Anyway, I like your layout. It goes perfectly with your story. I don't spot any grammar errors anywhere and it looks like everything checks off. Good job and keep it up! :3

@ LoveForGiraffes
Oh my gosh thank you! :D

Aw I loved this story very much =] And I'm pleasantly surprised with where you went with it; I wasn't expecting Teagan to be Andrew's sister that was a great twist for me. Overall, I enjoyed reading your story and I'm so glad you joined my contest! The winners will be posted very shortly!