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  • hiiamguesswho

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    Aw I love how snobbish Brynn is reminds me of myself HAHAHA sorry not sorry
    June 6th, 2013 at 04:02pm
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    So, I usually don't read fan fiction but I'm happy that I read this, it's different from most of the other things I read. I was especially happy with this story because I didn't have to know who John was, to be able to read it and understand what was going on. (Honestly I didn't know John wasn't your own character until I glanced at the info page.) I also liked the characterization of John and Brynn, and the descriptions of Brynn. It was a very different way of describing someone, and it turned out nicely. I think you should update soon!
    June 6th, 2013 at 05:24am
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    o0o0o0o0o this is interesting please do update!
    June 5th, 2013 at 03:48pm
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