Alright, so finally got to reading the whole story, it's not bad :) just read through the chapters and fix a few grammar issues and you should be good to go :). Looking forward to the next chapter.
And to think, You were going to stop writing! 2 recommendations dear, I do believe you are set :) Don't know you too well, but proud that you stuck it out!
@ thehollywoodsmile omgosh! thanks for commenting!!!! yea im glad you could picture it in your head because that's what i was aiming for! :D haha definitely write a fan fiction-who's your favorite person(s) right now? thanks so much!!!!
I love it! I want you to keep it up, and add more. Please! It was so good, I could picture it in my head. You make me want to write my own fanfiction, but on who??? Haha, but yeah I love it!