Chasing the Sun - Comments

@ nomdecrayon24
Thanks for you comments my dear! I appreciate the time you took to read and I hope to see you back for the sequel

@ pixiewayro
Thanks hunny bun xxx

@ Loomaloo
Thanks for commenting, I hope you enjoyed the finale and enjoy the sequel!

@ Musically Impaired__
Hehe. I thought about ending it like that, but then I couldn't! I hope you enjoyed the end anyway!

@ BeAZombieLikeMe
Thanks for the comments! I hope you enjoyed the last chapter!

Oh yes thank you for updating! This was lovely and it "ended" in a nice way. I can't wait for the sequel your writing is lovely and I can't wait to follow Gerard and Lily's adventures again. :D

*squeals and fangirls*
I was so happy she caught him, and that they decided to stay in love! Yay! And they're gonna be parents!!!! Eeeeeeeep! (Even if the sequel ends up not happening, I still love this, and I'm so glad I read it!)
Aaaanyway, I really can't believe it's over! Idk why you're unhappy with it, but I simply adore it! I'm actually very pleased to just have had the opportunity to beta it.
*dies*

Also, thank you for the love brief in the note, hun! I love you! Xx

Pleasr please please let her catch gerard! My heart is breaking

I say rip out our hearts and let her miss the plane. Then fast forward a few years later with Gerard coming to visit her. Doooo it!

Oh now I'm anxious to see if Lilly will really catch Gerard. Way to amp up the tension. I don't know how long I can wait to read the next chapter. I just need to know that Lilly will be fine with whatever happens. Good job!

Wow! That was unexpected... I really didn't see this coming! I can imagine she's scared, but I'm sure she'd be able to be a good mommy! And ooooh, I hope she gets to Gerard on time!!!! (Especially since he never stopped loving her!). Great chapter, hun! Xx.

The 19th chapter really got my heart pumping, I was so scared they would break up. I mean my heart dropped when Gerard questioned their relationship. And as much as Lily's feelings are valid it annoys me how little she thinks of Gerard. I'm so happy they made up! But seeing as how things are going I don't know how long that'll last, I'll see I guess! Off to the next chapter!! Xxoxoo

I can't handle this! I can't... this is so great, nice job. I love this and I can really feel what Lilly and Gerard are going through and wow. I've been rooting for them to stay, but the relationship is so fractured. Everything is so toxic! At this point I feel like anything is possible, but my heart is just not ready for the answer. It would be killer to see a sequel. I'm real in love with Lilly and I understand her feelings and her anxiety. Whatever you choose to do please have mercy on mine and Lilly's feelings. Great work.

I can't handle this! I can't... this is so great, nice job. I love this and I can really feel what Lilly and Gerard are going through and wow. I've been rooting for them to stay, but the relationship is so fractured. Everything is so toxic! At this point I feel like anything is possible, but my heart is just not ready for the answer. It would be killer to see a sequel. I'm real in love with Lilly and I understand her feelings and her anxiety. Whatever you choose to do please have mercy on mine and Lilly's feelings. Great work.

Aaaaww this chapter... Home is calling Gerard, but it seems he'll have to do it alone... =(. Well, I can't wait to see what's still to come in this tale, hun! Xx.

I wouldn't mind the sequel. It's kind of hard to determine if there should be one when you don't know how the first part ends.

Oh and shit starts to get real... I'm pretty excited to see what happens in these last chapters, hun! And I hope you'll be doing that sequel! Also, I'm not allowed to play the quessing game, huh? ;) xx

Oh these two stubborn people! Jeeze, look how long it took them to actually talk. Lol they defintely deserve each other, and them ending up all snuggled up was pretty cute! Idiots! I love them! Xx

Oh lord, this was headed in a direction I kept PRAYING it wouldn't! Insecurities suck so bad and I was really scared that Lilly would have said FAR worse things to Gerard in her drunken state, thankfully I was able to rest easy that the words that tumbled out weren't as bad as they could have been - even though they weren't necessarily good either. I hope Gerard keeps his promise, I feel as though being so drunk Lilly's insecurities were heightened to visibility, which makes me think she' constantly feeling that way but hides it. She and Gerard make an awfully cute couple and I'd hate to see anything go too wrong between them. I wonder how his relations back in the States are doing? Oh. and regarding the sequel...HELL YES PLEASE!!! Not only because I LOVE your writing and amazingly thought out plots, but because I'd love to see where it'd go and what the future holds for Lilly and Gerard further don the road. Once again fantastic chapter!! I wonder how horrible Lilly's going to feel on a scale of 1 to 'Why the hell did I do this to myself?!' in the morning, hahaha! xxx

Oh lord, this was headed in a direction I kept PRAYING it wouldn't! Insecurities suck so bad and I was really scared that Lilly would have said FAR worse things to Gerard in her drunken state, thankfully I was able to rest easy that the words that tumbled out weren't as bad as they could have been - even though they weren't necessarily good either. I hope Gerard keeps his promise, I feel as though being so drunk Lilly's insecurities were heightened to visibility, which makes me think she' constantly feeling that way but hides it. She and Gerard make an awfully cute couple and I'd hate to see anything go too wrong between them. I wonder how his relations back in the States are doing? Oh. and regarding the sequel...HELL YES PLEASE!!! Not only because I LOVE your writing and amazingly thought out plots, but because I'd love to see where it'd go and what the future holds for Lilly and Gerard further don the road. Once again fantastic chapter!! I wonder how horrible Lilly's going to feel on a scale of 1 to 'Why the hell did I do this to myself?!' in the morning, hahaha! xxx

Ooooh promises I hope some people can keep...

@ pixiewayro
I try my best to sneak a few surprises in hehehe.

@ BeAZombieLikeMe
I'm glad you liked Hector! He's such a laugh, I loved writing him so much. I agree with you completely, everyone has that one person who makes them feel shitty about themselves, and for Lilly that person is Fiona. I wanted everyone to be like 'she's a bitch' and then be like 'oh wait, she's actually okay'. And yeah, Lilly really needs to start having a bit more faith in Gerard or things aren't going to last very long!

Okay since I haven't commented on not one but TWO chapters of this story (sorry by the way) I'm going to dissect both, beginning with chapter 16. HOLY CRAP BATMAN!! I thought Gerard and Lilly's cousins hanging out together would all be good fun and it seemed like it actually turning out that way which I was really happy for. And Hector is a laugh, I couldn't stop laughing when they were talking about Gerard's dick (never thought I'd say that in a sentence). I actually felt my stomach drop reading just the beginning of the final paragraph and started cursing at my screen like a damn sailor! If it wrong of my that I wanted nothing more than yo punch Fiona and kick Gerard where the sun don't shine? UGH! I felt so bad for Lilly, she doesn't deserve any of that. I felt like wringing her sister and boyfriend's necks UNTIL reading chapter 17, thank god chapter 17 was there or I would have gone batshit crazy. I felt for Lilly, everyone has that one (or sometimes even more than just one) person in thier lives they feel like they'll never live up to no matter how hard they try, that no matter what they'll always come up short. It really made me angry thinking that this could have just been a power play or something on Fiona's part, that she'd have the audacity to do that to her own sister. However, I went from wanting to run Fiona over to wanting to buy her a yummy cupcake. At first I felt like Fiona would have denied trying to come onto Gerard only to admit it later, but when she picked her sister up and dusted her off before knocking some sense into her was when I was like "I like this chick.". It was true, even I was caught a little off guard when Fiona accused Lilly of thinking so little of Gerard, I do admit, Lilly does need to give him more credit. However insecurities, especially when their louder than reason, can ruin so many things for a person. I practically felt my heart melt when Fiona said that Lilly was all Gerard talked and asked about, it was probably the cutest thing ever and hell, I fell in love with him at that moment!! He's such a cutie and their just adorable together! <3 Oh no, only 8 more chapters!!! Nooooo!! I'd hate to see such an amazing story end but if their's a possibility of a squeal I'm happy happy to see how this story get wrapped up and the continuation begins. I've read your three part story about the killjoys about a month back and I honestly want to go back and give you my full opinion about the story, even if it mean I have to read it again (I enjoyed it so much the first time I wouldn't mind doing it again ;D), as well as Three is a Crowd, I feel bad that I didn't comment on such amazing stories. It's an error I promise to fix!!!! Well going back to the possibility of a squeal all I have to say is I loved the way you ended and began each story for the Killjoys, so I really do look forward to see what you do with this story, especially since all your writing is just so excellent!!! xxx

Only 8 more chapters???? =(. Then you have to sequeal us!!!! =D. Anyway, I loved this sweet little sibling moment they had, because it wasn't really expected... And I thought it was sweet how Gerard is so in love with her! Xoxo