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  • SBurgundy

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    I like this story in the sense that I can relate. I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I know I was in the same situation, I didn't have any friends who liked the band so I was on my own. So yeah, your story is definitely relatable! But it's also well written, clear and to the point. I don't read band fanfics but I know lots of people like Asking Alexandra (I know I like a few of their songs!) I feel like the summary gives away too much, but you don't want it to be too vague, so don't change it because of my opinion! Anywho, I'm sure you'll get lots of readers with this!
    June 21st, 2013 at 09:27pm
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    OOO ME LIKE NEW READER BY THE WAY
    June 5th, 2013 at 09:02am
  • julietteaurora

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    Still loving it!! <3
    June 2nd, 2013 at 07:52pm
  • DancesWithSugarCubes

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    Oh! I've never heard of Asking Alexandria before, but this seems like an interesting story so far! Amelia has an interesting relationship with her mother! :) Only two chapters long, so I couldn't really say too much about it so far, but keep going!
    May 28th, 2013 at 08:24am
  • xXxMarchOfTheDeadxXx

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    I'm glad :) I thought it would make a good story :) thank you for commenting!
    May 27th, 2013 at 10:35pm
  • julietteaurora

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    Very exited for the rest of it! (:
    May 27th, 2013 at 10:28pm