Don't Wake Me Up - Comments

I love simple layouts. For a while I've been obsessed with so much intricacy and fancyness and I just realized man, simple is better - don't distract from the words with too much.

Two things that are amazing about this story right away: It seems to be from a man's point of view, which you don't see so much on Mibba, and you are describing the person he loves as if they are the reader - brilliant!

OH NO IT IS SO SAD IT TURNS OUT SO SAD OH NO. I teared up a little OH NO. Those two were obviously so in love and so sweet.

Oh wow. This is brilliant and beautiful.

Well, to start off, this was extremely well-written. I liked your choice of using second person because you wrote it well and perfected it throughout the piece. I think the second person point of view really helped me feel a lot of the emotion through the piece, you know? It got better and better as I read along.

There was so much description that I was extremely blown away by how well you wrote different things. Honestly, I agree with Fair., I think you need to make a story out of this and other things because this is beautiful. Amazing job! :)

I felt everything that the character felt. Awesome job

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking.
Y U DO THIS TO ME?!
I loved it, so much.

You should literally make a story out of every drabble you write, it might be hella hard but your writing is so beautiful, you should just do it. Do it to appease me.
Keep up the great work, I want to read moooooore.

The description and writing and emotion were all so beautiful and well done. <3

Oh how I love this song, and even more now for helping produce such a wonderful piece of writing. You're very talented. I loved this.

This is sad in so many levels of sadness I mean, like the undead's vessel, I think that this is beautiful. I almost cried at the end and then I when I scrolled up, I saw the smiley so yeah haha.

Also like her, I assumed that this was about a girl's lover who died

Anyway, this is so descriptive and I could feel the emotion in the story and all. God, I can't even form coherent words over this It's just so awesome, you know. It's so hard to write in present tense for me so kudos to you for successfully doing it.

This is beautiful.

I sort of expected that it was about his (is you a boy? I'm assuming here) death after she (assuming again!) reaches over to the empty side of the bed. But it was still beautifully done.