Destroying What I Love - Comments

I hope you update this like....NOW!!! I can't wait to read more!

OH MY GOSH FUCKING ALEX IS A DICKHOLE!!!! EXCUSE MY LANGUAGE BUT I AM SO MAD RIGHT NOW! LIKE HE REALLY NEEDS TO GET METALLY CHECKED!!!>:C Poor Ana I hope she gets better </3

AHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ANA NOOOOOOOOOO

AHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ANA NOOOOOOOOOO

ugh update please!!

cough cough get pregnant or something

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IM CRYING THIS WAS SO GOOD! Go vic for telling mike what's up

can you please just write a brand new story and its just nothing but smut oh my gosh YOUR SMUT IS RIDICULOUSLY GOOD. and i love the mike bonding time ! I love the spanish in this chapter and it makes me happy that i can speak it. However, when Mama Fuentes said she was very pretty you said bella which is french im pretty sure. the word pretty in spanish is bonita :). I love the meeting between the family though. THE END OF THIS CHAPTER MAKES ME SO SAD. ana definitely shouldn't have texted her ex BUT mike has no right to say that. thats ridiculous. UGH UPDATE SOON IM MAD

random smut i like it

This was so cute/hot/perfect

Yay an update! You know happy I am about this. You described things so well in this chapter so great job. I'm so glad to have seen the guys and of course my angel tony <3. UPDATE SOON

update aw

you really tied in spending a week with Vic and vacation time really well. I'm so excited to see what happens when she truly gets to meet the other guys as well as papa and mama fuentes! AND MORE TONY I AM SO EXCITED TO SEE TONY.

i love how Ana and the guys met. I think it's really unique and as uncliche as it can get. I also LOVE the ending of the first chapter more than anything. AH ITS SO PERFECT HE SINGS TO HER IM CRYING. and the kiss aw <3. the alexander thing is super creepy though, he needs to learn to back off; she needs to get a damn restraining order. i also love amy's character :). um your smut is amazing to put it lightly.

UGH ALEXANDER MAKES ME SO DAMN MAD. He is so messed up and creepy he reminds me of some future serial killer. she NEEDS to get a restraining order on him asap. I mean i will jump into this story and get one for her if that's what it takes. Ana you dumb hoe get some sense. jk i love her so much.

I really like how you mix in descriptions with your dialogue but that only seems to happen when it gets sexual. I think you should try adding more body language and moves even when they're not being dirty. I'd like that :). I also like how all the chapter titles are lyrics.

something else i'd like to see is more jaime/tony/mike. I think there should be a group hangout or more time with her friends to show their lives outside of just each other.

the only thing i see wrong with this story is you sometimes don't proof read and things get messy because you don't fix the minor mistakes; i think you should start doing that. Other than that, this story is fantastic !! If you'd like me to beta (edit your chapters before you post) id be happy too! love you booooo <3.

aw cute ending.

aw cute ending.

aw cute ending.

aw cute ending.

aw cute ending.