HOLY CRAP! That was a cute, innocent story until the last half of chapter 5! JEEZ! Way, to pull a plot twist! I like this story, you write like i do, not much detail, but a lot of meaningful dialogue. I have a story like this, and it's also called Olivia, only mine is about BJ and 80 and they have a girl named Olivia--it;s a short one... but if you're looking for some more drama, check out my recent story, Send Me Your Amnesty. Thanks and i really liked your story!