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  • NuclearRebel1039

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    Why do you have Billie smoke? He said he doesn't so why did you make him?
    September 17th, 2013 at 05:40am
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    Why do you have Billie smoke? He said he doesn't so why did you make him?
    September 17th, 2013 at 05:40am
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    September 17th, 2013 at 05:40am
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    HOLY CRAP! That was a cute, innocent story until the last half of chapter 5! JEEZ! Way, to pull a plot twist! I like this story, you write like i do, not much detail, but a lot of meaningful dialogue. I have a story like this, and it's also called Olivia, only mine is about BJ and 80 and they have a girl named Olivia--it;s a short one... but if you're looking for some more drama, check out my recent story, Send Me Your Amnesty. Thanks and i really liked your story!
    July 26th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • NerdGlasses

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    I think Billie will want her to spend the night more often from now on hehe
    July 8th, 2013 at 04:00pm
  • NerdGlasses

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    I'm really liking this! I love the dookie era and there are definitely not enough stories about it. Please continue, it's good so far :)
    May 30th, 2013 at 07:16pm