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Pepperony is my ultimate ship and this was absolutely perfect. You hit the nail of Tony's personality on the head, and this was just perfect.

Oh my gosh, I absolutely loved this! You were spot on with Tony's personality and I loved the way you wrote Pepper. This was very well written and made me laugh several times. I especially loved the ending. The layout was awesome and really added to the story. I am also recommending this.

This was really well written! I'm surprised at how you nailed Tony's personality, because not many writers can. It was overall cute and enjoyable to read. Definitely recommending this

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oh goodness gracious, this is some of the most spot-on tony starks i've seen on here. i can't really tell you the last time a one-shot has made me laugh this much. "I'm upset that she's ignored my pleas to just go home so I can take my shoes off and relax and we can maybe have sex" oops giggling still

This is so funny xD xD You really did capture the character of Tony Stark there... amazing

Oh, Tony! This was hilarious! The writing flowed very nicely too. I loved reading this!

Oh, and P.S., the layout is wonderful!

Oh, and P.S., the layout is wonderful!

Wahhhhhh, I love it! You basically detoured the whole clothes shopping prompt, but I can't even be upset because I enjoy the route you took much, much better. Just the thought of Tony Stark in an IKEA is enough to tickle me pink.

First of all, I have to commend you for going canon. Hardly anyone ever goes canon with Iron Man fics, and it literally drives me crazy because I adore Pepper Potts. And you portray her character so, so well. Secondly, HUGE kudos goes to you for writing from Stark's POV. To find a fiction from Tony's POV that is actually written with his exact wit and satire is a rare commodity, but you pulled it off amazingly well. I haven't ever really read anything where Tony's personality and mannerisms are spot on, but this accomplishes that feat remarkably.

As for the story line, it's so damn cute. Even with Tony's narcissistic attitude, it made me giggle and go "aww". Tony and Pepper's interactions were adorable. And the kicker at the end took me by surprise. I appreciate how you incorporated the prompt.

Your writing style is stark (no pun intended) and simple, yet sophisticated in its own way, and I enjoy it very much. This was a pleasure to read. Thanks for entering the contest, man. :)

This is great
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