Bite Me - Comments

Sorry for triple post

Aside from me not liking vampires (comment swap) I think the story is ok. There is a big problem which is when you break the fourth wall. Often you will say things middle of a paragraph such as: (do you see all the alliterations) which I find a major disturbance middle of reading. Fixing this issue would greatly improve your writing for this story and all that follow.

Aside from me not liking vampires (comment swap) I think the story is ok. There is a big problem which is when you break the fourth wall. Often you will say things middle of a paragraph such as: (do you see all the alliterations) which I find a major disturbance middle of reading. Fixing this issue would greatly improve your writing for this story and all that follow.

Aside from me not liking vampires (comment swap) I think the story is ok. There is a big problem which is when you break the fourth wall. Often you will say things middle of a paragraph such as: (do you see all the alliterations) which I find a major disturbance middle of reading. Fixing this issue would greatly improve your writing for this story and all that follow.

@ ADayWithGracie
Thank you!!!

I loved the story! Especially since Vic and Jaime are together!

Me gusta.

It's not 2012, the world's not ending. We have time.

@ jaime preciado.
Hmm if i do a sequel, it has to be short, like less than 5 chapters. They'll all be long tho but it will take loads of time

YES. I want a sequel. I want more. I want more Kellin and Oli and Copeland and Austin especially.

@ jaime preciado.
U want a sequel that badly?!

Make a sequel. I wanna see Austin face off against a vampire hunter. Hell, I'll write it with you if that's what it takes.

@ jaime preciado.

@ xMareBear14x
Don't worry guys. I will make out it a happy ending;) this chapter is going to be long so look forward to lots of things happening

Their is a long list of things I'm expecting from this update haha. But all in all I really really want a happy ending. Like, more than anything.

Dude, no. I thought this was supposed to be a romance. They need at least one chapter to hash things out and then a concluding chapter, and we better get to find out what happens with Oli and Kellin.

Finalfuckingly Jaime! Now he tells Vic how he feels when he's almost dying! You're lucky you have dimples Jaime or I would slap the shizzz out of you! But yay! They're finally together!
great update c:

Update this before I find you and do things to you that would horrify a badass vampire like Austin.

ahhhh a;skfgjl :D

This chapter rules! And have fun at house party! Seeing them live is just such an experience!

@ FunxMistakes
... you're comments rule!!