Ohana - Comments

This melted my heart. I just wanna wrap Cayden up and snuggle him to death. Well not that hard. But you get my point. Please write more stories this cute and fluffy and I'll love you even more =]

Aw. I loved the layout, though it had a few faults it was still really good.

I loved the start and the end, and the middle and all of it.
I like your writing style and how you set it all out even if it seemed alittle rushed it was still really well put together.
all in all I just really liked this story and the ending was really sweet

Aww, so sweet. <3

@ Unexpected.
oh my goodness you really like it? It was all just thrown together at the last minute. haha I'm sorry I ended it there. I was going to extend it, but in the end I decided not to. :p I'm glad you enjoyed it though.

That was so perfect and I'm so mad that's where it ended but I'm so pleased with it but I'm so upset that I'll never know what happens between them but I like using my own imagination and it's all very confusing.
:)