What Happens in the Locker Room... - Comments

haha! Oh my gosh that's great. That's an awesome way to end it! Great job, I really liked this story! Maybe a little gory at the end, but that just made it better for Oates' story!

Loved it :D

I like the twist at the end - this was well written and enjoyable. :)

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So I like the layout, it fits the theme of the story very well! Your writing skills seem good, and the dialogue seems solid! I already can tell the story is a little creepy! Thats why I won't continue reading, not because it's badly written, but because I'm more of a romance person! But good start!

Oh my gosh...cliff hanger! This is interesting, keep it up. :)

interesting - update soon please, I'd like to know what she said and what's happening

This seems interesting, I'm excited to see what happens next!