September 3rd, 2013 at 02:01pm
Punk Rox! - Comments
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OH! And I grinned like a fool through the candy aisle chapter c:September 3rd, 2013 at 06:34am
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So it took me a little while, but I read it all c: and can I say IT WAS ONE OF THE CUTEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ <333
I really enjoyed:
1. Jesse's nickname for Andy c: chibi hehe
2. Your writing style is phenominal! (that's spelled right, right?"
3. Jesse was so random and adorable, he reminds me of you in a way when you get hyper :p
4. I loved CC's randomness xD "ooo fireworks!"
5. YOU MENTIONED DANNY AND JOE. HOLY HELL I LOVE YOU.
6. I like that you didn't rush their relationship c: even though I enjoy sexy scenes it was nice to see them hold back, you know?
7. And I loved the flamboyant-ness of Jess c: he was so cute!
I'm upset with myself that I didn't read this sooner!! I really wish I did :c but I'm after part two now ^^September 3rd, 2013 at 06:32am -
@ RebelBullet
Ohh! Okay, I understand. Sorry, just got a little bit confused. But, thanks for clearing that up c: I really do love this story, great job!July 31st, 2013 at 01:54am -
@ Zahizzle6
I made it slowly disappear. "He" appeared when Andy was having a little mental crisis with his sexuality. It was like an insanity guard to stand in for things he didn't understand and refused to accept. When he finally stopped denying his feelings, he no longer needed a stand-in for those holes and "He" just...faded away when the job was done. I think it appears every now and again in the second book, which says Andy may have suffered some actual mental damage that required "His" assistance to keep together, but I can't remember.
I'm sorry, that was probably a more detailed response than you expected. ^_^ There was actual psychology behind Andy's MPD, if a little exaggerated (a lot exaggerated), and I probably bored you that whole time. I just thought Andy needed an amusing way to cope with his attraction to Jess, I never really meant to make it into this big thing.
@ AndyBelle
Thanks for reading, guys! :) I didn't think anyone else really cared all too much about this story. I'll start work on Book II tomorrow, be sure to check for it! :DJuly 31st, 2013 at 01:20am -
I love this! But..what happened to Andy's whole..double personality thing? :O Seeqqquueeelll C:July 31st, 2013 at 01:04am
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Write a sequel please <3July 31st, 2013 at 12:54am
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I forgot about the 'war'! Haha x3June 25th, 2013 at 12:30am
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Oh ma God :3
I forget about Jess' sass towards the bitch ^_^
Haha, Jake is an idiot! ;)
Ah, sí, sí, Jesse is cute :3
As for Jesse's mother...
Anda que te coja un burro! Y besa mi culo, puto!June 14th, 2013 at 05:14pm -
Juliet is fucking amazing! :DJune 9th, 2013 at 06:50pm
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Ah, the nickname :)
Andy's so cute!June 8th, 2013 at 04:57pm -
Is it?
Oh, fuck, it is!
The fuck did i forget that?! :/
@ RebelBulletJune 7th, 2013 at 08:34am -
@ FallenCreature
Nope, that's actually where it stops, even on the original document. I actually added in stuff.June 7th, 2013 at 04:52am -
Ah, young love! :D
You cut out half the stuff! :OJune 7th, 2013 at 03:20am -
Ah, Quincy xDJune 6th, 2013 at 12:48am
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I forgot about the awkwardness, poor Andy!June 5th, 2013 at 08:38am
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Oh man, I forgot how funny Andy's 'little voice' was! :DJune 4th, 2013 at 09:18am
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Ah, back when Quincy was believed to be a dick!June 3rd, 2013 at 02:06am
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Ah, the nostalgia...June 2nd, 2013 at 05:22pm
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Awesome!May 30th, 2013 at 02:29pm
=^_^= Thanks...but it really isn't that good, that's why I'm just working on finishing Book II and getting the new story done. I just figured I'd have the first Jendy up to remind me where I started. This story was the one that really kicked my ass, ya know?