Hiding Place - Comments

Interesting chapter! It's fun to see Emma interact with other people :) Can't wait to see what comes up next!

A Sharks fic and a Couture fic. Interesting, lets see how this one goes.

I'm so excited to see where you take this story. Logan doesn't get enough love on this site or anywhere else for that matter.

Also, thank you for reminding me how bad the Giants played against the Blue Jays 3 weeks ago lol

Cool start. I like the idea of neither Emma or Logan backing down from their argument (until Emma got pulled away, of course). I look forward to reading more.

Interesting start so far! I can't pretend to be much of a fan of baseball, but it's a nice to read about something else.

Also, maybe due to the fact it's really late when I read this chapter, but I comprehended that they were in CA but blanked that they were in San Jose and instead guessed the player was Doughty since I know he's a Jays fan. But Couture is much better! I look forward to learning more about him.

Ah ha! I really like this so far :) Can't wait to see where you go with it! :)

Ahhhh. Okay. Are you ready for this? I'm so ready for this. But first let me just start by saying that when you started with this whole Logan thing I was kind of shocked. It was so out of left field and well, let's be honest, I'm normally the one with the super sized crushes like this. But now I'm so happy that Logan has come along and this whole thing exists. Yay!

I really love Danielle and Emma's friendship. In a way it sort of mimics ours a little and that's kind of hilarious. But the way they give each other shit is nice. And the fact that there's baseball in this story is also nice because I know how you feel about it but you're writing it really well.

Their initial meeting is so hilarious. Literally, I was in hysterics the first time you sent this to me. And re-reading it now, it's still just as funny. Their banter is out of this world. I love that they bicker but you can sense the flirty undertones. It's awesome.

I put a fake smile on my face before starting, “Oh really? That’s cute. You must be from Canada down here on vacation. Every team in the majors is considered to be a contender for the World Series at the beginning of the season so keep telling yourself that. When August rolls around, the Jays will be in the same place they are now – the basement of the AL east.”

Literally cackled at that. Seriously. Go Emma.

And then when Danielle tells her who she was just arguing with. Oh my God I totally lost it. So funny. This story is just amazing. I love the way you write. And even though I've read the next bunch of chapters you have written I want more. I want to read it again. I want to go over it again. *sigh*

I don't even like Logan and I love this. That says a lot, doesn't it? Update soon!!!

I LOVE YOU! OMFGOSH!! The San Jose Sharks is my favorite team (since I'm from the Bay Area) and Logan Couture is my favorite player and there isnt that many fanfiction of him!! Omgosh! I can already tell this will be my favorite story!