Endgame - Comments

oh my gosh this makes me so sad it's tearing me apart :(((
i love that this isn't your overdone cheating story, you know? like how there's anger and some dramatic affection displayed to win someone back
this is slow and trying, just like how some things are ((((((::::

This is beautifully written. I love your sensativity to the characters and the way that you do not yield to conventional expectations of emotional reaction after infidelity. I love the way you amplify every emotion by highlighting the strength that it takes to actually endure a relationship. Often, the power of a relationship is overseen as a side note, but these days and always, a relationship and the willingness to feel every emotion is remarkable. Well done so far.

this is amazing

THIS ASSHOLE
UGH
I HATE HIM SO MUCH WHY
NO DON'T CALL HER DOLL
DON'T CALL HER HONEY
YOU LOST THAT RIGHT, BUSTER
NOW BUST YOUR ASS OUT OF THAT ROOM OK YOU DON'T DESERVE HER
racque why
y

HUH
so i guess u didn't get my warnin' about leavin' her alone last time m8
huh
R U SPECIAL OR SOMETHIN
U DON'T HAVE TO FOLLOW RULES
WUT
U THINK THAT IF U BUY A GIRL FOOD IT'S AOKAY
boy I oughta smack the tomfoolery right out of you damn
(soz this story makes me violent idk wut to tell ya babe)
YOU DIDN'T LOCK THE DOOR
DID YOU NOT READ MY COMMENTS LAST TIME
LOCK THE DOOR
PUT ON YOUR WAR PAINT
MAKE HIM MISERABLE
SIMPLE
DAMN
I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S SO HARD ABOUT THAT
LIKE
JEEZ
DON'T FORGIVE
BE STRONG
BE
STRONG
U THINK
I'M PLAYIN'
BOY I WILL SMACK YOU
don't do it girl pLS

I adore you always
omg this boy is killing me with his words ugh stop it
wait omfg
was what made him feel the worst girls crying

YO.
YO GIRL. I READ THAT FIRST CHAPTER
THAT WAS WHERE YOU SLAP HIM IN THE FACE FOR BEING STUPID TRYNA CHEAT ON YOU
and chapter two though
I'M HUNGRY TOO
HUNGRY TO SLAP YOU
stop trying to feed her your lies and your stupid sandwiches and your seven up
you sound cute
BUT YOU CHEATED SO NOW I DON'T LIKE YOU
GIRL CUT HIM
HE'S NOT SORRY
ONCE A CHEATER ALWAYS A CHEATER GIRL SLAP HIM UGH
AND OH YOU HAVE TO MAKE YOUR OWN LUNCH NOW HOW DARE YOU MAKE HER CRY FOOL I'LL SLAAAP THE CHEATER RIGHT OUT OF YOU girl don't do this to yourself DON'T GO IN THE BED OH GOD NO DON'T SNIFF IT GIRL YOU ARE A GLUTTON FOR PUNISHMENT BE STRONG GET YOUR WARPAINT ON LISTEN TO SOME QUEEN DON'T EAT THE SALAD
DON'T EAT IT
GIRL YOU SHOULDA BLEACHED HIS CLOTHES
~groans~
DON'T BELIEVE HIM HE SOUNDS MANIPULATIVE GIRL HE'S SORRY HE'S NOT GOING TO HAVE SOMEONE TO FOOL ANYMORE NOT THAT HE LIED AND DESECRATED YOUR RELATIONSHIP
GIRL
HE DON'T CARE
srsly update this soon or i'll cry

oh man he's a despicable little shit for cheating on her
and tryna bribe her with food (but that usually works)
but I can't wait to see how he's gonna win her back ooooooh

Yah, the first chapter! Loved it. So sad though...

I loved the summary, but there is no chapter to read...

The characters = PERF
I can't wait to see where this goes!

NOLAN FUNK PLZ CUM 2 ME
I mean come
plz come to me bc you are so attractive