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  • loveupsidedown

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    I really like this. Please update soon.
    June 18th, 2014 at 01:07am
  • malorienewton

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    So hooked on this story! Update soon pwease! :) <333
    April 17th, 2014 at 06:11am
  • jaseyrage

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    Hi guys, thank you so much for all the feedback! I am currently finishing up the next part, so it should be up soon! I am soooo sorry there was such a long break, school has been hectic!
    March 17th, 2014 at 09:37pm
  • hannahlovex3

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    yasss! love the update. I was apprehensive about the whole Darcy character coming in because it seemed quite strange to have this perfectly well structured and cohesive buildup of a relationship between two people that seemed so genuine then to add in the dimension of a love triangle so early on. So if you are doing the whole love triangle thing, im glad your holding it off or just arent doing it.
    Anyway, lovely seeing an update!
    March 8th, 2014 at 04:39am
  • loveupsidedown

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    Its back!! Please dont leave it so long between updates!
    March 7th, 2014 at 11:08am
  • MissyPrissy

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    I absolutely love your story!! I can't wait to read more!
    March 6th, 2014 at 03:24pm
  • Writing-luvr11

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    Update soon pwease!!! :)))
    July 1st, 2013 at 06:54am
  • hannahlovex3

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    Perfection. Very Happy
    June 28th, 2013 at 01:18am
  • Erin.Grace.

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    OH SNAP!! about damn time she stood up for herself! fuck yes!! (excuse my language here) but again FUCK YES! Her ex and his dumbass followers can fuck off! now all she has to do is keep up that attitude! (I have a bad mouth when I'm excited....specifically the fuck word) anyways now why the fuck is she avoiding Landon? She doesn't even know what he wants! although, it's sort of obvious the boy is fucking nuts about her! I'm glad he was there to see her loose her shit a bit at those little under classman!! Hell yes man! awesome update! Keep up the stellar work!!!!
    June 21st, 2013 at 06:08am
  • jaseyrage

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    @ TheAntsInvasion
    Marry me?

    Hahaha, I LOVE all the feedback. You all are the best! <3
    June 12th, 2013 at 05:38pm
  • TheAntsInvasion

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    This is honestly the first amazing story ive read in six months. It made me want to finish my own original fic and then write another.

    More more more! (kidding take as long as you need. But im sure itll be perfect either way.)
    June 10th, 2013 at 09:49pm
  • jaseyrage

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    @ Erin.Grace.
    Ohhh my gosh, thank you so much!! <33 This story is getting the BEST feedback I could ever ask for. :D
    June 7th, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • Erin.Grace.

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    extremely curious as to where this is going, but by chapter 4 you have already got me hooked! I love it! Although it may be your writing style I love most! You could be writing just about anything and I'm sure I'd love it
    June 7th, 2013 at 09:23am
  • Writing-luvr11

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    Awwww!!! Update soon please!!! :)
    May 31st, 2013 at 07:05pm
  • jaseyrage

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    @ Writing-luvr11
    Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I posting the next chapter now, because you made me soo happy!
    May 31st, 2013 at 06:06pm
  • Writing-luvr11

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    Please update soon!!! Very descriptive, I can visualize everything!! MORE MORE MORE :D
    May 31st, 2013 at 12:05am
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