Ruined - Comments

@ jazmyndylan
You're welcome! :D

@ rachthebat.
Good ideas, maybe I'll use them :D thanks!

@ jazmyndylan
You're welcome :)

I know how that goes, I'm struggling to finish a few of mine! Haha. If it helps any, I'd love to see Matt get even crazier Maybe things come to a head, and Brian fights back? I don't know. XD

@ rachthebat.
Thanks! yeah I'm really trying to think about where I'm going with this. I know I'll finish it, it'll just take me a while to get back in the swing of it! Thanks again!

I really like this :) Matt is crazy, that's a given, ha! But it's really sad to see him so heartbroken that he's just lost his mind. I liked Brian's rebellious moments, and the line "I'll never be yours was so poignant. Even if Matt owns his body, he'll never own his mind, his heart.

I want to see Brian rebel more, but hopefully not get himself hurt.

@ BlackMorphine
Okay, just for you I will, soon. (:

Please, update this.

@ AJM1

I have no inspiration for this, but hopefully I will soon. XD

: I can't wait to read what happens when Matt sees Brian next. I'm sure they'll fight and have some words. I really like their personalities and Matt (shakes my head) he's still a sexy guy, @sshole or not! Can't make me hate him--Uh, don't take that as a challenge. LOL Hope more is coming! Take care Jaz!!!

@ xxOpheliexx
Haha, Matt is very crazy! Merci for reading!

Brian se rebelle un peu! Enfin! Je pense quand même qu'il aurait dû en parler à Zacky, c'est un crétin pour ne pas en avoir parlé... La vengeance de Matt va être terrible, en parlant de lui, il est complètement fou :o

Hahahahaha. Ansiosa para o castigo de Brian.

be a rebel brian and have some fun i wouldnt go downstairs just because matt says so especially if i made plans with zack.

i agree with @ Nevermindd haha i can't stop loving Matt and Brian together no matter how dysfunctional it is :(

love it. :)

@ BlackMorphine
Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying it! <3

Sinceramente? Que história fascinante. Mesmo que Matt seja um ogro, possessivo, dominante, obcecado, doente, ele ainda consegue ser atraente. Eu não tenho raiva dele, ou ódio, ou desprezo. Apenas me sinto insatisfeita de que ele passe na cara de Brian o que aconteceu há anos, e se não fosse o suficiente, ainda forçasse a Brian um relacionamento abusivo. Ele é o esteriótipo da "mulher renegada", só que com músculos e uma resistência cavalar. Esta história é quente e dramática. Você só poderia investir mais nas cenas sexuais. Elas poderiam ser mais longas e detalhadas.
Gosto desta história porque não sei qual será o final. Brian não está "in love" com o Matt, e Matt exerce muito da manipulação para com o Brian. Não sei porque ele fica neste relacionamento. Só pelo Avenged Sevenfold e pela imagem do Matt? Ou porque ele gosta de ser abusado durante horas a fio?
Não gostei do que Matt fez com o cabelo de Brian. Meu cabelo é enorme, e nunca que meu namorado o cortaria. Achei isso injusto. Aliás, tudo nessa história é injusto. E maravilhoso.
Estou feliz que tenha atualizado em tão pouco tempo! Obrigada <3

ugh i just want to punch matt in the fucking face and tell him to get the fuck over it. I just want someone to sit outside their room and listen to what is going on and like yell at them to STOP like i do i really want that to happen already and it's only two chapters in

@ Nevermindd

Thanks for the thoughtful comment! :D

Okay...Am I the only one who can not hate on Matt even in this story? Damn! I feel bad for Brian, of course...But, at the same time, I find it hot? Ya'know? Does anybody understand me? Anyway...I think maybe Brian has a crush on Jimmy? Feels something about him or anything, but it's just me thinking out loud. I just hope Matt realizes what he's doing to Brian and stops it in time! Both of them are so cute together, and it would be a pity if hate was all that Brian could feel for him.