Clarity - Comments

@ BlueDreams
She's too gentle for that type of thing haha can't see her doing it either.
I know XD they have been dancing around each other for ages and possibly around a year or more of dancing around too. So difficult and the final chapter will have Chris, Deirdre and everyone so you get to see how everyone is.

@ teenagedream91
Yes but I can't imagine Xi throwing punches xD
I was so glad, like FINALLY! I had been wanting that for ages.

@ BlueDreams
It would have hurt less, it's less permanent, but more memorable if I have to say haha
Yay!! I'm so glad you caught that! She did take the reigns for once and told him how she felt instead of Ben taking control all the time.

@ teenagedream91
Let's say that the punch would hurt less than waiting haha
I liked the fact that she took the reigns with Ben for once, it was time.

@ BlueDreams
I think punching was more Deirdre's thing haha waiting is more like Xianghua and I think that is more effective in the long hall.
He did break up with her, silently she agreed, but she was just utterly speechless how he brought things to light, something they both ignored from the beginning. She didn't know what to say, but she did take the reins when she was with Ben.
Yeah she chose to be alone, she didn't think it was best to be with someone that she didn't love all that much or someone that caused her so much pain. No, it wasn't when Ben started talking she lost it lol

I feel awful for Xi but I predicted this, sadly. However, bless Susan for her help and yes! Punch them! Nonetheless, Xi's move was better haha to actually make them wait.
Chris acted wrong but goodness... to admit that he knew things were doomed was painful to me. I just wish Xi had said something herself, Chris did the break up practically on his own. But then she finally spoke to Ben, FINALLY.
And she chose to be alone? I wasn't expecting that! But I don't really think it's a definite decision. Ben's argument definitely got to her but I am happy to see them together!

@ Dezi Demize
I don't think you are going to find out how someone broke into her apartment and stole her possessions. Didn't plan on explaining that.

Tbh....I'm still waiting to find out how broke into the apartment and stole all of Xianghua's possessions!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! <3

@ ArielRomanov
Drama that will soon be over with. Hang in there haha

@ BlueDreams
I am. I really want to finish this story, I was on fire to finish, but getting home after a long day, I am just exhausted unless there is a spurt of energy within me that happens from time to time and I spit out another chapter. I'm excited for Striptease

Erm mer gerd! Drama drama drama. Lol! Damn.

@ teenagedream91
You are on fire with it!
I can't wait for what you have up your sleeve for Striptease

@ BlueDreams
Dreams do feel real.
No she can't and I already wrote some of it while waiting for my geology class and I got a lot done haha. I can't believe I'm almost done with this story. I could expand it if I wanted to but I don't. It would be too much. I'm too excited for striptease :) I'm in love with Margo's character she's a little different than what I write for my main character.

@ teenagedream91
I know, I know but I felt for her anyways.
Well, clearly she can't run away forever. Career and Ben caught up.

@ BlueDreams
Yeah it's her worse fear to have her mother die and to continuously have it in her dreams is the worst. It's just a dream though. Remember that doesn't mean it's foreshadowing or she can predict the future or whatever lol
I wanted them to be really shellfish in this story with someone who is like Xianghua. A person who rarely speaks up. Most of it is forcing her to make her own choices and facing her dilemmas head on because she's a runner haha ran from her career, ran from Ben, ran from her feelings, just confrontation in general.

@ teenagedream91
I know but even still "Yay you're break but your mother has died', that was too much xD
Why are men apparently so selfish in this story? xD

@ BlueDreams
Yeah the idea was a spur of the moment type thing haha kind of fills that fantasy of them having a child since I probably won't cover that.
It is selfish. That's the whole point of the explosion. I didn't realize they were out publicly still until near the end. They wanted to know now and boy it's going to be crazy!!! Just wait and see ;)

@ kittkatt6661
It is a hard choice and I am still debating which one she will end up with.

Poor Xi. That would be a hard choice to make for anybody.

AH PREGNANT WITH BEN'S BABY. Even if it was a dream, I nearly jumped from my chair haha.
Chris wanting one-on-one time with Ben? Mhm.. to me it immediately sounded like "get off my girlfriend". And yeah... goodness, he 'exploded'. Well both of them exploded, it was just unbelievable. I found it a bit selfish too. To suddenly confront her publically because both of them 'can't wait' or whatever.