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  • teenagedream91

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    Yep yep :) I never wanted that to be something that overpowered her or be one of those people that always wondered every single day. She considers them her real parents and they are an interracial couple :) Always a fan of those haha

    She did!! She could have texted Tom or Paty or possibly someone else, but she went to Ben.

    She didn't want to bother Chris at an ungodly hour for something like that and Ben is her second choice. He knows Ingrid so he was that great support system
    January 17th, 2014 at 09:42pm
  • BlueDreams

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    Oh Xi is adopted! And I'm proud of Xi, this story is all about realising what is best for yourself and breaking cycles.
    She texted Ben... be still my heart!
    Well... Benny, Chris is probably in the US so Xi might not have called him for that and also well because she knows you'd know what to say and I'm glad to see the bond.
    January 17th, 2014 at 01:19pm
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    @ LupinPatronum
    He did come running and it's adorable all at the same time. Thank you so much. I feel so flattered :)
    January 17th, 2014 at 11:05am
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    I loved this chapter and how he came running to the rescue for her. This is my favorite Benedict story :) your writing is amazing and I love the way you portray your characters.
    January 17th, 2014 at 10:38am
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    @ BlueDreams
    Me too and I'll think of something for Chris and Deirdre so everything is in order.
    January 12th, 2014 at 06:39am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Haha I hope she gets happiness soon!
    Yes, I think that's a good plan of action.
    January 11th, 2014 at 03:51am
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    @ BlueDreams
    He does and Deirdre's character surprised me as I heard a small whisper like have me punch him on his way out. I was like that's brilliant!! haha
    I should add how they would act as a couple some writers end it right when the couple gets together and call it a day. I should at least have one or two chapters of that along with tying ends with Chris and Deirdre.
    January 11th, 2014 at 02:51am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I think he deserved the punch, to be honest.
    I don't think that would be main for me (moving in, engagement, baby, etc) I just really want to see how they can be together, what happens with Chris and I'll be happy with that as the final chapters.
    January 10th, 2014 at 11:23pm
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    @ BlueDreams
    I know. I wanted her to punch him and I as thinking maybe when they are talking. Then I couldn't fit it in and thought she would need time before doing something like that so why not a surprise attack? Lol a lot like Deirdre in my opinion. She let him off easy.
    Aww thanks I approve of them too. They are adorable and they need to be friends to move it along. I noticed they are just painfully avoiding each other these chapters.
    Yep it's sort of almost over unless I elaborate a lot on my plans and make it passed 20 like I said I was. I don't want all my stories to be the same with moving in, engagement, wedding, and baby. Not all I that order but you get the gist. None of that is happening in this story unless people beg for it and I'll dedicate a chapter for all that jazz
    January 10th, 2014 at 08:13pm
  • BlueDreams

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    Deirdre... I feel so bad for her but Ben, finally, had the courage to do the right thing.
    Xi is getting serious with Chris, my goodness. I really approve of them, though. But you know.. being friends with Ben will just be the beginning of something, I can feel it!
    Wait.. this is almost over? OH MY GOD!
    January 10th, 2014 at 02:03pm
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    @ ArielRomanov
    haha Deirdre really shined in this one.
    Xi is a silly woman, but she wants it to work xD
    January 10th, 2014 at 01:32am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Muahahaha! Deirdre kicks ass. ;D
    Oh, Xi. Silly woman.
    January 10th, 2014 at 01:10am
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    @ BlueDreams
    She does :D and she will sooner or later. I love Deirdre now more than I did before XD damn you D!!!
    January 7th, 2014 at 10:42am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Yesssss, Deirdre deserves love!
    January 7th, 2014 at 10:26am
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    @ BlueDreams
    He's perception is that he did too much thinking in the passed and wants to react on impulse which can be good at given times. She does and I might have her date someone else later since I feel so bad for her XD
    January 7th, 2014 at 03:33am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Ben hasn't been thinking a lot lately haha his feelings get the best of him.
    And yes well... I feel sorry for Deirdre, she deserves a lot more.
    January 7th, 2014 at 01:03am
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    @ BlueDreams
    No. It's horrible when other people are involved in that sort of thing. He did XD oh Ben I don't think he thought it through lol Xianghua is just confused with the confessions and advances she's getting from Ben. At least she didn't kiss him lol
    Thank you. Deirdre is a genuinely amazing person and for Ben to hurt her....he is going to have a very long talk with her. She deserves better. Ben had an opportunity to talk to her alone so he took it even if she's buzzed haha she's more truthful with a little alcohol in here.
    January 7th, 2014 at 12:51am
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    @ ArielRomanov
    No he shouldn't have but then he didn't really have feelings for her in that nature. Through missing her and jealousy harbored feelings that he didn't want I deal with.
    January 7th, 2014 at 12:16am
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    I am a bit sad to see that, deep down, there is still a trace of feelings from Xi's part towards Ben. Don't get me wrong, I think things can work out but nobody needs to get hurt, especially Chris or Deirdre.
    Wait... Ben wore Xi's present while going with someone else? Dear God.
    I have to say that I like Deirdre more and more. She just seems to be naturally good and trying hard to make things okay for everyone.
    Ben apologising while she's drunk... priceless haha but yet again let's see what his plan of action is now.
    January 6th, 2014 at 11:35pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    He shouldn't let her slip through his fingers. :}
    January 6th, 2014 at 10:14pm