Closeted Troublemaker - Comments

I have to admit- I was surprised by the way you decided to portray Jimmy. Many people use him as a happy go lucky, slightly awkward, uncontrollable child trapped inside an adults body, but bringing out this rather dark side of him is a refreshing change. I like to think that he is a little bit of an enigma, and even from the very mention of him at the beginning of the story, you've brought that across really well.

floating through my ear like warm butter being spread on bread Nice simile! Dripping honey and melted chocolate are used a lot, so seeing something like this is another fresh way of writing. I love it!

Oh, naughty Jimmy leaving her right there without release! It was a good way of doing it, rather than rushing the sex scene, the teasing is always good! Anyways, you've done an amazing job here and despite the odd error here and there, you've written a sexy, hot one-shot! Well done bub!

Why no finish? Damn Jimmy for teasing. That's not nice. Anyways I absolutely loved it.

ohhhhhh jimmy is such a tease. i loved it

Why you no finish?! I was as sexually frustrated as her, jesus! Hot story though. :D

When I saw the teacher's name I thought of President Snow from The Hunger Games. *shudders*
Oh oh oh you tease! You can't finish it there! Argh! XD
I loved this! Had me laughing nearly the whole way through, then you go and throw in a half naked Jimmy and I'm like that's hot! Then you leave me hanging! *shakes fist* Hahaha
Good job my lovely!

Hmm...so the visual I got out of this was rather steamy! Mmmm Jimmy in closet....oh yeah baby! Nice story. =D