Betrayed - Comments

Alls I'm saying is, don't kill Jimmy around Christmas time. Good story though!

I loved this so much, and can't wait for more. Looking forward to the "fun surprise"! Please update again soon. Xxx

Love it love it love it. I'm glad Mark gig his comeuppance, he deserves go die.

So I just found this and love it! Though I'm waiting for the shoe to drop...she can't keep her secret from Matt much longer, I have a feeling something bad is going to happen and shit is going to hit the fan.

Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more!

OMG you used my my home Island as part of your story :)
I'm from Aruba (currently living in The Netherlands for studies) and not much people use it for their story even though it's one of the most tourist attracted Island in the ABC's (Aruba, Curacao and Bonaire )
thank you though <3

Really good again! I'm excited for when it goes back to present time as well to find out what Matt's gonna go!

This just keeps getting better. More soon please ... Xxx

What a great chapter to an awesome story! Can't wait for more ... please update again soon. Xxx

Please update again!

@ hmcx
Thank you!!

Just finished reading all the chapters so far. I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter and the one after that

Love the update!

Yay another update you are on a roll. I hope Beth really listens to her Nan and tells Matt. Maybe she could end up being a double agent. Instead of being chased. Anyways I really do enjoy your stories.

@ Cityofghost
Thank you! :)

Yay you updated. I love this story

@ jacklynnirene
Thank you!! I'm working on the next one :)

Oh man! Two updates!!! And that is quite the cliffhanger. I love this story so much.

Yaaaaaaaaay! Update! Merry Christmas to us! ;) This really made my day!

Please update again soon cos I can't wait to read more of this. It's a great story xxx

Oh my deathbat, that update had me all up in my feels. I feel so bad for Beth and man that B had that threat comin.