I often find that it is difficult to write a one shot. To write emotion and to make the reader love the characters would be incredibly difficult in just a short chapter.
I like the storyline. The journey they face as they fulfil their wish to wed before Elena's death is beautiful. I, myself, am a sucker for weddings. I'm in the process of planning a wedding, and I love the moment when Elena's father walked her down the aisle. Just reading the short scene had me thinking of my own wedding next year, and the emotion I know will be there.
There was also a part where Connor is telling Elena to let go. This also drew some emotion into me, as my grandfather recently passed. Just the reminder of standing around his hospital bed, and hearing the whispered words of my uncle telling him that it was okay, that we would all be okay and that he didn't need to hold on any longer - your story had that bubbling back up again.
I often find that it is difficult to write a one shot. To write emotion and to make the reader love the characters would be incredibly difficult in just a short chapter.
I like the storyline. The journey they face as they fulfil their wish to wed before Elena's death is beautiful. I, myself, am a sucker for weddings. I'm in the process of planning a wedding, and I love the moment when Elena's father walked her down the aisle. Just reading the short scene had me thinking of my own wedding next year, and the emotion I know will be there.
There was also a part where Connor is telling Elena to let go. This also drew some emotion into me, as my grandfather recently passed. Just the reminder of standing around his hospital bed, and hearing the whispered words of my uncle telling him that it was okay, that we would all be okay and that he didn't need to hold on any longer - your story had that bubbling back up again.
This was a fantastic entry! Beautiful love!