A Family Drama Casted With My Life - Comments

  • Ashes to Graphite

    Ashes to Graphite (100)

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    Wow.

    First of all, I must commend you for sharing such a personal experience with the world. This entire piece was so raw and emotional, and you did a wonderful job making me feel the heart wrenching emotions that you were feeling. Even though we don't know what your brother's condition is, we can still feel the pain and struggle your family is going through. I loved how you didn't need to TELL us the affect it was having on you and your parents, how you knew you just needed to droop your father's shoulders to show the stress.

    I wish you and your entire family all the good wishes and luck in the world with getting through what you are going through. I admire all of you for staying strong, and I know that you will get through it. Keep your chin up, and keep writing, especially if it helps you emotionally.

    Lots of love,
    Ash
    June 3rd, 2013 at 06:57am