Park Bench - Comments

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Thanks for the concrit
The thing is, I wanted to make Gerard sound really girly and..well...'teenie', I suppose. Hence the abusing caps locks and the chatspeak. If you look at our other stories, you'll notice that we don't normally write like this :mrgreen:

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Awesome story, Really made me laugh. Few things though

Can you please go back and take the chatspeak, example "ORLY", out of your story, It makes it more frustrating to read and people will just go on by without even trying to decifer it. It throws readers off and instead

Instead of abusing caps lock why don't you try to bold it instead. You'd get tons more readers. :cute:

as usual it was fabby :]
Frank saved the daaaay! Even if he was molesting Gee...which was kinda cool...

hehee

this made me laugh

:)

Pixiesan:

Thanks for the free lube and condom offer, but I think I'll give him money for it. He obviously loves those choco-dicks.

More when you can. :XD

Awww, you're lovely :D
Thanks for commenting.

Munches-Pear:

just one? ):
now thats disappointing lol
but the update was cool. I bet his shorts are awsome

'Fraid so, gotta do business here, how else will Frank get any choco-dicks?
And indeed they are :D
Alex and I both own one leg each :)

just one? ):
now thats disappointing lol
but the update was cool. I bet his shorts are awsome

Thanks for the free lube and condom offer, but I think I'll give him money for it. He obviously loves those choco-dicks.

More when you can. :XD

^Nuh- uh! I own the lube, remember?

I should bring that tomorrow. I keep forgetting.

And we should stop major spamming this page XD

Vampire:

^
:shifty
My stick.
And thankies again :D

Who's stick? Huh?

Well fine. I own the condoms and lube. :twisted:

^
:shifty
My stick.
And thankies again :D

It's all good :] lol I lurrve it
Ha I'm a sucker for random stories, I write one myself xD
I want the holy stick dammit >_<

Munches-Pear:

XD awsome.
haha oompa loompa

:shifty
Of course I don't have an obsession with oompa loompas.
:tehe:
Thanks for the comment, it means a lot :mrgreen:

Munches-Pear:

XD awsome.
haha oompa loompa

:tehe:

Thanks for the comment

XD awsome.
haha oompa loompa

Wooooooow (:

Our own little story Jenny XD

And just to let you all know, this was written in the early hours of the morning...when our brains are the weirdest point.

Thanks for the comments Panic! Attack

Hey, thank you very much for the feedback, it's appreciated :]
And yeah, the tooth fairy bit is inspired by Alex's longing to be a tooth fairy when she grows up XD

I found the tooth fairy bit really funny.

And poor Frank, getting woke up by
those stupid little kids.

That was really funny and kind of cute!
Gerard in neon pink shorts is a funny mental image.

I really think you should continue.

Welcome to the strange strange world of Alex and Jenny! Have fun, don't get lost, and remember ; Safe sex is good sex!