Bad Girls Are No Good - Comments

  • laredo.

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    Wow, I have to say this is quite the unique story. It captured my attention from the first paragraph and I found myself eagerly reading the rest of it. You have a unique way of writing that kept me interested. I like how well you characterized the characters, because you didn't overdo it but it feels like we know the characters well enough. I agree with Fair, they all have different personalities and you definitely fleshed them out well.

    Plus the plot is something I haven't seen before, and I liked to see something unique. So good job on that. This is an excellent story!
    August 6th, 2013 at 10:24pm
  • capheus

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    I'm really into this story. Maybe it's because i'm going to be starting a story based off of the song Cell Block Tango from Chicago and it reminds me of this, or maybe (most likely) because it's just freakin' brilliant, I don't know but i'm hoping you'll update soon.

    I want to see what kind of trouble(s) the girls will get into and all that, considering they just killed a guy, you know? I really like how they all have their own different personalities though. I notice sometimes in other stories with more than two main characters, the characters start to be lacking in characterization and the story gets kind of dull but so far you've done a good job portraying who they are. I really am looking forward to this update, I hope it happens soon. c:
    July 3rd, 2013 at 04:10pm