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  • LoveandListen

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    I'm glad the bad moments are over for Trey and Sandreya. Please please please write more about them being in love :) It's so good to see they are finally happy together.

    I want a boyfriend like Trey. Sad
    July 23rd, 2013 at 05:31am
  • Heynow1

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    Your Story is so good! I love it!
    July 16th, 2013 at 03:41pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Dreya needs a reality check >_< Of course your dad is gone but.. it's gonna hurt. But you should live your life like you've been, all our parents want is to see us grow. She kinda got on my nerves in these two chapters >-> But I loves it. I can't wait for more♥
    July 16th, 2013 at 04:40am
  • LoveandListen

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    Your story is amazing <3!! I LOVE it. Keep on writing!
    July 13th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Eeep D: I wonder what happened to her dad. Though I have an idea >-> but I'm eager to know anyways xD Great chapter :3
    July 9th, 2013 at 08:21pm
  • LoveIsJustATrap

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    No problem, it's obvious that you have great potential as a writer. The way you grasp the attention of the reader is truly inexplicable. Take your time updating, I'm sure it will be worth the wait!
    July 9th, 2013 at 01:44am
  • selfish.

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    .OH MY GOD, that is possibly the best thing i've heard in days when it comes to my writing. I thought only a few cool people read this story but thank you for seeing it's potential. I'm so grateful for readers like you.
    I will update as soon as I can.
    Thanks again, you rock!
    July 7th, 2013 at 06:24am
  • LoveIsJustATrap

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    I just wanted to say that this is so far THE absolute best story I have read on this site. I can't wait for an update; I'm hooked!
    July 7th, 2013 at 02:18am
  • selfish.

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    i feel like a perv when writing sex scenes. I don't want to sound stupid; especially when I've read so many other stories with great smut.
    July 3rd, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Yays! They did it >O< Amazing chapter love x3 and it wasn't sucky at all~ It's better then what I write xD
    July 3rd, 2013 at 10:13pm
  • squidgyyo

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    We didn't really see much on "nice'" trevor except for when she came home drink and during the pizza scene, but I like the nice trevor. I dont like sex crazed trevor because I feel like he has feelings for her but his "needs" are over coming his feelings ya know. But anyways I like nice trevor, update soon.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 06:02pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Eeeep! >_< He's back~ I hope stuff happens >->

    Anyways keep it up :3
    June 27th, 2013 at 08:13pm
  • writtendiaries

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    Keep writing! Love the story line.
    June 26th, 2013 at 06:02pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Messed up big time =3=

    I'm still loving it and can't wait for more :3♥
    June 25th, 2013 at 02:16am
  • Heynow1

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    So good. I hope they work things out!!
    June 24th, 2013 at 07:00pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Awh, he was worried ^_^ dammit Trey be a real man and stop playing with her T^T
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • judelles

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    Update!
    June 17th, 2013 at 11:04pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Wow o: that was amazing! ^^ keep it up girlie
    June 11th, 2013 at 08:30pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Amazing! I can tell that the sexy scenes are going to pull me in already >-> Keep up the good work~
    June 9th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • rebekkah_lynn

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    I am already hooked. I cannot wait to read more! Keep writing!
    June 6th, 2013 at 07:30pm
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