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omg i just found this and i am so in love

omg.. SERIOUSLY
THEY WERE HOLDING HANDS, AND HE WENT WIHT HER EVEN THOUGH E WAS GOING CRAZY WITH THE WOLFSBANE, I CAN'T. This chapter was so cute and so pitiful! My poor baby, Isaac. <3

STILES ILYSM OK U LIL AWKWARD SOUR PATCH KID
ISAAC BB OMG NO DON'T CRY
IT'S OKAY HALLIE'S HERE
omg they're sleeping together brb i cry

It's so cute and I want them to be together and more please

So freaking sweet! Hallie an Isaac are absolutely adorable. Update soon! :)

THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER UGH
Yeah, this is actually really magnificent and it makes me jealous okay, I don't know what the heck is going on with Hallie finding all these dead bodies but I'd be lying if I said I didn't find all the Isaac scenes with her comforting him and stuff the most adorable thing ever. Honestly, so cute.
And omfg, hero Stiles at work, saving werewolf asses :'D

Really loved this chapter. Isaac is very cute and I'm obsessed with him. Can't wait for more! The chapter wasn't too long at all, I prefer longer chapters :)

I just had to read this when I saw that it was an Isaac Lahey fan-fiction and I'm really glad I did. It's well-written, and interesting to read.

Your grammar and flow are great. It doesn't stall anywhere or become boring at any point of the chapters you've posted. However I did notice that the chapters did get a little fast-paced at times. Nothing wrong with that, though. I think I would prefer it to be fast rather than slow.

I think you did really well with creating the characters, and taking Teen Wolf and making it into a good fan-fiction. It could work as an original fiction too, which I like.

Good job. :)

Your writing is not shit.
I will admit the chapters are fairly fast paced but not poorly written.
Overall I like it so far.

THIS CHAPTER WAS THE PERFECT LENGTH HONESTLY IT WAS WONDERFUL.

I love your writing!! I think it wouldn't make all that much sense for the Alpha pack to be interested in her. At least not right now. Maybe once she and Isaac get a little closer? To get to Isaac. But I like the darach part very much. I like what you're doing with this story. And I think she's doing better than I would be at finding a dead body in my bathtub. I can't wait for another update!

Hi! So, I just wanted to say that I love this story, and I'm really looking forward to more!! :D
And to answer your question about darach VS alpha pack, I'm interested in what you'd do for it to be mainly darach! The alpha pack story seems to be fairly straightforward, and aside from that I'm really curious about what you've been planning!

Wwwwwwooooooooooaaaaaaaahhhhhh um no stiles she needs to stay with Isaac because they are meant to be in love so goodbye. Update soon because I need to know what happens like soon or I'm gonna cry. K bye <3

DARACH IS A WILD FUCKER OK OK
nOW THAT WE'VE ESTABLISHED THAT
ugh Isaac is such a cutie
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA FINSTOCK LOL
I LOVE HIM
aw omg Stiles is precious
EXCUSE U STILES CAN SHE PLS STAY WITH ISAAC BC HELLO CONNECTION OBVI

Can't wait for more! Hallie has the worst luck it seems :(

This is unbelievably good. Hallie has such bad luck, so terrible. But I read this before catching up on the third season, (I got unbelievably lazy) and I was wondering, just to be sure, if the dead bodies were cause of the druid/darach guy?

Either way, it's completely creepy and I don't think I'd be able to live in that house any longer.

You should update soon, like now because this story is too damn good for you not to. Kk, hugs and kisses, bye <3

OH GOD POOR HALLIE! D: she's been through so much and by so much I mean so many dead bodies umm????
yes omfg please please please don't ditch this I love it it's one of the best Isaac stories on here okay
BUT OMFG DRUID/DARACH THING IS FREAKING ME OUT

please please don't ditch it! it's an amazing story!! x

dont delete it!!! just update it!!! and soon!!!