I just found this story and I love it. I love Tom and the way you play on her personality. You make everything that happens feel right for each character. I hope you're still working on this story because I would love to keep reading it!
I love this! I read it all in like two hours haha I couldn't stop. I really love Tom, she's so spunky and I love the relationship with her and bones and Jim, it's so natural and they have great chemistry. I really can't wait to see what happens in year 2, please update soon!!
So, I got really happy like a dork when I saw that I was one of the people you mentioned in yours author's note! Makes me feel special! And, whoo! Go Leo! You sexy doctor man you! I honestly forsaw this and was just waiting for it to happen! Oh! I can't wait until Jim and Tom start to actually realize thier feelings for eachother! And I love the whole "deal" thing they got going on! I can't wait to see what happens next! Gah! I'm loving this story and can't wait for more! Not only is it a story with a solid, and orginal, plot, but it's also got a very solid format and you're a very good author! I need more! Please?
Oh lala! No feelings, yeah right! That's bound to spell nothing but trouble. My senses are telling me that there might also be a fight. Guess I'll just have to wait and read. Update soon! (:
Oh! I love this! The character development is just amazing and I love the relationship between Tom and Jim! I really like how Tom just speaks her mind! And I love how flustered Leo gets when she tells him He's hot! He is, but I just the story and can't waut to see how Tom and Jim's relationship developes! I'm excited to read more! And I can'wait for the next update!
Oooo Jim and Tom are going to fail at the whole no feelings thing! I mean, come on, those things NEVER work out lol. Poor Bones.... I actually pity him.... And scruffy rugged handsomeness works!!! xD
More please? Something tells me that Uhura and Tom teiming up on Kirk would be funnier than hell! I can't wait for more. I honestly am in love with this story!
Aww yes! Daisy Mae sounds like someone who would drive me crazy within the first few seconds of meeting her. Thankfully Tom is there to calm her down and talk straight to her. Haha! I'm excited to read the unfolding of their times at the Academy! (:
First off, I love Tom! She is amazing! I love the way she thinks and how she is a total tom boy! No pun intended! Secondly, I love how she meets Jim! And again, I love her mindset! I dont care where you go with this story, I just want more!