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  • lilacpony

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    I've been re-reading this for the longest time! This is the first Dave Franco fiction that I've read that is actually interesting and well-written. Please update!!!
    September 9th, 2013 at 01:13pm
  • lindseyiam

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    update update update pls :3
    September 4th, 2013 at 06:31am
  • lickingwindows

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    I'm desperate for an update! :c
    August 30th, 2013 at 06:08pm
  • vices

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    "eat your tacos"
    oh god i'm crying i really am
    but man, Brandon and dimension! never thought i'd say those two words together
    August 25th, 2013 at 07:01pm
  • Ariananina;

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    Oh gawwwwwd, just update like 123737363 times a week please, you're killin me!! This is the only story I'm interested in reading right now -.-
    August 25th, 2013 at 09:43am
  • summertimelover

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    Aha I mean Amelia silly me lol
    August 25th, 2013 at 07:39am
  • summertimelover

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    I love Amanda.
    August 25th, 2013 at 07:38am
  • summertimelover

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    Update ur killing meeee
    August 23rd, 2013 at 06:32am
  • whatsinalifetime

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    OMG! So good! I'm so happy they both know where they stand with their feelings. Can't wait to see where this goes!!
    August 16th, 2013 at 05:14pm
  • jogar3

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    I love this story so much
    August 12th, 2013 at 07:50am
  • vices

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    MEEPS OH MY GOD THIS DID NOT SUCK AT ALL THIS WAS A WONDERFUL UPDATE
    ARIA IS SUCH A SWEETHEART OMFG
    Dave you get dat girl mmhm ~~
    August 11th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • lindseyiam

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    this didn't suck at all! I REALLY like the double POV. I know you said there might not be a lot but I think it adds to the story. And it'll give you a lot more leeway to write more in your chapters! You're a great writer.
    August 9th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • sjmoy

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    It didn't suck at all! Loved it!

    Please update soon! You're a wonderful writer Mr. Green
    August 9th, 2013 at 05:23am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Holy moly! I love this story so much! You're doing an amazing job!
    August 9th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • Jaimieatworld

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    Eep glad they both admitted their feelings! Can't wait to see where this leads them, hopefully together lol Smile
    August 9th, 2013 at 01:56am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    No!! They can't admit their feelings to each other, get my hopes up and then decide not to do anything about it!! Hopefully they can get together soon (in secret) and not get in trouble! I love the story, post more soon!
    August 8th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • Miabones

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    aww i love this i hope they can make it work without getting introuble
    August 8th, 2013 at 07:19pm
  • slumflower

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    OH MY GOSH.
    THIS IS SO GOOD, DAMN YOU DAVE!
    and she really is an angel jesus, she must be hiding those wings because that's the nicest thing ever for her to help out cameron and his family like that. i also really love amelia lol tehe
    August 8th, 2013 at 06:59pm
  • Ariananina;

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    Woo! Speedy update, loooove it! Hope you get a chance to update again just as soon, I'm really diggin this story!
    August 8th, 2013 at 05:14pm
  • apocketfulofposy

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    Great update. It's getting closer now, they won't be able to resist much longer, I just know it.
    August 8th, 2013 at 05:02pm
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