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  • JustADaydream

    JustADaydream (100)

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    Awh thank you! Sorry about that, I've only just started using this site, so I kind of just copied and pasted then uploaded it, but thank you so much for being constructive! :)
    June 5th, 2013 at 10:20pm
  • FeliciaSueLynn

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    This was really cute. The only thing i'd say is to maybe add more spacing to each paragraph. It was kind of hard to read with how cramped it looks. :)
    June 5th, 2013 at 09:34pm
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