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  • KICKASSKK

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    love it!!!!
    July 4th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • marina2351

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    not boring at all!
    July 4th, 2013 at 01:40am
  • marina2351

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    not boring at all!
    July 4th, 2013 at 01:40am
  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 7: I can tell you're really loving writing this story and so you should; it's brilliant. However, in all the excitement, just be careful to not mix up past and present tense , which you've done, albeit only very slightly, at the end of this chapter. Great story though. Wow
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:55am
  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 2: JEEEEEEZ LOUISE! I'll be having me some super sweet dreams tonight. Again, grammar and punctuation is fine; just needs to be spread out a little more
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:29am
  • MCRLUCY

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    Only read the first chapter and wham, I'm hooked but then, I am a self confessed Tom Hardy obsessive! Your grammar and punctuation is good and the first chapter flows well. Just one small criticism; I think you just need to separate your paragraphs a little and if you can, you should always put spaces after "full stops" and "comma's". Other than that teeny bit of advice, I cannot fault what I've read in chapter 1 which is why I've recommended and subscribed
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:22am
  • zabetheliza79

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    Yay!!!Two updates in one day. P.S. nothing hotter then the idea of Mr. Hardy spanking someone. Well played!
    June 28th, 2013 at 04:23am
  • selfish.

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    i love how realistic this story is.
    update please!
    June 28th, 2013 at 01:48am
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    @ marina2351
    I didnt expect it to come out that fast either haha! Oops?
    June 27th, 2013 at 11:09pm
  • marina2351

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    damn that was fast lol and thanks for the second update! glad he's so happy about the baby.
    June 27th, 2013 at 11:08pm
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    @ marina2351
    Thank you! Im working on the next chapter right now! ^_^ Should be out in an hour or so!
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:42pm
  • marina2351

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    omg that ending..so cute.
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • Ashley8726

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    I'm not gonna lie at first I didn't think I like this story... But I'm infatuated with it. Wink
    June 20th, 2013 at 09:10pm
  • Blissed

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    @ Ashley8726
    I try to make it a little funny :P
    SO glad that youre loving it! Thank you!!! <3 <3
    June 20th, 2013 at 04:38pm
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    @ zabetheliza79
    Oops! Was my sexual frustration showing?! haha! Im glad you enjoyed it ;)
    June 20th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • zabetheliza79

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    Umm...Sorry it took so long to respond. I had to take a shower after that last chapter. It was HOT!
    June 20th, 2013 at 04:04am
  • Ashley8726

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    Haha.. Your chapter titles are priceless. I'm beginning to love this story more and more btw!!!
    June 20th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • MissaVengeance

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    :) yea
    June 20th, 2013 at 01:10am
  • marina2351

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    @ brndig0r3
    yay!!! thank you for not leaving us!!! <3
    June 20th, 2013 at 12:29am
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    @ marina2351
    hahah! I thought you might like that! ;)
    and I was going to leave you guys hanging on him walking in the door like that but I just couldnt do it!
    Im glad you like it! <3
    June 20th, 2013 at 12:28am
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