Beauty Killed the Beast - Comments

@ IFallinReverse
Thank you! I'll be getting an update done soon hopefully!

I really love this story. I'll be waiting for another great update!

wow, it's been a while! haha, glad you updated,
i think it would be cool for you to do Ronnie's POV for one chapter or just part of one.
hopefully i'll see an update soon!

I really like this story.i love the flashback thing too! Please update soon

this is really good!
i love the whole flashback thing. it makes me more interested, as if i wasn't interested enough.
lovely story.
i hope to see an update soon! c:

@ PoeticMess.
Looking back at it, I definitely agree. I thought it would be a cool idea and it just didn't work out as I had wanted it to. I'll try and make it better from now on. :)

Me again. :)
To be honest, I liked the "real-time" part too. Although I didn't really like the use of lyrics this time. To me, it just didn't fit and sort of pulled me out of the story and back into real life, which isn't really a good thing.

I really want to read another chapter and see what's going to happen now that they're together. I hope her feelings are going to be evident. :)

When I write comments, I usually write while reading so I can get the whole chapter in without forgetting anything. So, when I first started reading the second chapter, I was really excited that it's current (post ETF/Prison) Ronnie. I like that their relationship has obviously progressed, even though I don't know how. At first I thought she was scared of him because of the gun comment, but she's worried that she's not going to like him, so she obviously did before. :)

I liked the use of Ronnie's lyrics as his words. That was cool. I reread them a couple times and tried to figure out if they were cheesy or not, and I've decided that they go nice with what they were talking about. Just be careful that the lyrics you use in the future fit the situation so that you're not twisting your story to fit the lyrics.

& I love that you used Ronnie in this story. I've met him too, twice, and he's just an amazing guy. He's definitely been through a lot in his life and that resulted in some terrible decisions that impacted a lot of people, but the way he lives now is so beautiful. His belief in Karma makes me love and respect him so much.

@ PoeticMess.
Thank you soo much, you are amazing! I've taken a look at a few of your fics and you're really good so that means a lot to me. I mostly write BVB fiction and I've never done a strictly Ronnie fic before so all my fans and readers are in the BVB fandom. I know what you mean about the introducing herself and the time issue with that. I was a little mad at myself for that too. I may go back and add stuff. I just couldn't think of anything when I was writing and I wanted to get the first chapter up to see how people would react. I've met Ronnie before and so I wanted to do a little something for him for doing so much for me. Dying is Your Latest Fashion pretty much inspired this whole story and I'm really excited to delve further into it myself. I love getting wrapped up in my own stories and really connecting with the characters.

I love Ronnie now even more than I did before prison and during Escape the Fate. :) He's becoming such a good guy. & I really like this. I was a little surprised of course, and wish there would've been more between the time she introduced herself and when he took her to his house, but I liked what was there.

I love the image of bad-boy Ronnie. He really was a trouble-maker when he was young. :P Good job so far! I can't wait to read more. I subscribed and recommended already so hopefully more people will find this!

:) update soon. I've been looking for a good Ronnie story to read. I write my own, but it's always amazing to read other peoples' versions of him.

Shit this is already so intense and Jesus fucking Christ he's trying to get her to play Russian roulette.