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  • ninahx

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    Congratulations, this story has been chosen as a "honourable mention" in my short story contest! This is a very unique and touching short story, extremely well-written and I enjoyed every word of it. Emotional, very strong. I loved it.
    September 9th, 2013 at 08:08pm
  • treat02

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    This is very good!!
    June 18th, 2013 at 08:44pm
  • PresleyRenee

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    @ lolita in love
    I'm so very sorry to hear about your loss. I can't imagine how difficult that must have been for you and your classmates! I hope you and her family are all doing okay <3
    June 17th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • Isadora Pierce

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    This was extremely powerful. I don't really have words. This girl that I went to school with died two days ago - she got hit by a train, we're not quite sure how it happened - and this...reminds me of her. A lot.

    Judging ends on the 20th. Any contest winners will be further notified by me.
    June 17th, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • jason todd.

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    I don't usually comment on one-shots and short stories because they never really make me feel anything but this story's powerful, man.

    I wish I knew what he did with my stuffed dog.

    That sentence is strong.
    June 14th, 2013 at 07:53am
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