Dude, this is so fucking cute oh my god. You did an amazing job at setting the mood for the two different settings. I could feel the horror and the tension when she was at her house with her Dad and then it was such a clear transition when she was with Ricky at his house when she was visiting him the first time. Well done, I must say. I read all of this in about 20 minutes and it's really good. I hope you continue :)
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