Oh Aren't You Sick of Sleeping Alone? - Comments

I reall really enjoy this

really like this :-)

There was one line in this that really stuck out to me; “…he had a drink in his left hand and a waist in his right….” I’ve never thought of phrasing this sort of thing like that before and it’s really clever, haha.

All Time Low was one of my favorite bands once upon a time and I still have a special place for them in my heart. It’s nice to run into a fellow – albeit more current (I’ve lost!) – fan of the boys after so much time away.

May inspiration never fail you. :)

--Another Comment Swapper

I'm here from comment swap. =]

I like the title, and the layout too, they seem to be in tone with the story.

Harmony seems like a really cool character. I like how you've described her. I like your details too. Your writing style is nice, it's different to most people on here. A breath of fresh air haha!

I hope you update soon.

*Comment Swap*
So first off, I really love how you have two perspectives in one chapter, and how neat it is! Some storys are a big mess, but this is great! I already love Harmony, and her personality. I am a bit of a clutz as well haha! I love your details, just make sure you don't over detail it too much! I only saw one grammar mistake, which is awesome compared to most people! I will be subscribing!