The Jesus Kid - Comments

@ indigo.
You have no idea how happy that makes me, honestly this story was just so...I was on the edge of my seat all the time to see if you had updated. It's honestly the best -- one of the few on here I should say, that I've read on this site! It's just so....I can't even find the words. But yeah, big fan!

The concept of this story is fantastic. This girl who was meant to be a Jesus freak but was corrupted by a bad event. Yet this anonymous narrator lets us know that she was never good, she was always corrupted and twisted. That bombshell of her fucking her best friends dad!? Like goddamn, you know how to write a plot twist well.

I really hope you can continue to write this story and I'm so sorry about your loss, and I hope you can keep strong in your difficult times.

Amazing story so far, I'm an avid fan already and will be eagerly waiting your new updates.

@ Ruby Salazar
I honestly was not planning to, simply because I haven't written in so long. But your comment actually changed my mind. I'll work on a new chapter now

I really really really hope you continue this story.

I do hope you continue this, this is simply amazing!

Ugh I love that you have no idea if the narrator is a boy or a girl. I'm kind of hoping it's a girl. Just because that's the kind of voice I get when I read it like I said in my previous comment. I can't wait to see where this goes and I really hope there are flashbacks of what happened to Alesana just so we get a better understanding of why she's so traumatized. (I mean it's obvious, but I'd still like to see the flashbacks)

I'm totally picturing this red head with a Brooklyn accent sitting in a dark motel room with a cigarette between her fingers telling this story to some reporter. It's the way that it's written, with the dialogue and all the slang and omg I love it. I can see it all perfectly in my head and just yes. I love this.

This is really interesting. When I first saw it on my My Mibba page I didn't click on it right away because the name kid of threw me. But after bumming around for a little while longer, I clicked on it.

It's interesting. That's the word exactly. I've never read anything like it. I'm wondering what happens to her to change her and how she changes. I can't imagine anything bad happening to her would make her lose her faith if she really believes that much, but it'll be interesting to see how you portray her and her changes.

This sounds just awesome. I love it.

This is fantastic, I love it!