The Moment Already - Comments

I was somewhat tempted to google them so I'm glad that I didn't and I listened because the explanations that you gave were enough for me! I love the main character, she seems really so well-developed and unique, completely unlike any other character I've ever read in anything, let alone in hockey fanfictions. The first two chapters were so good and I really like the way you write and how well you describe things :) can't wait for more to read!

Can't wait for more :)

I can't wait to see what you have in store for this!

great start! Definitely different!

I was halfway through chapter 2 when I realized where you were going with the porn star angle because I remembered that porn star at the Kings playoff games last season. Of course I had to stop reading then and google it to remind myself about her and I saw that you used her name:) Very different start to a story compared to anything else I've read, so I'm intrigued. I enjoyed chapter 1 and the backstory, it's nice to get some insight into where the character is coming from. Can't wait for more interaction with Jeff!

This is so funny. I love it so much. ;)

Wow that was a fun chapter. I like Taylor, she's a cool chick and I recognized her. Hmm, is that Jeff at the end?

I really should be putting the finishing touches on my contest entry but I chose to read this. I'm laughing, the plot seems absurd but yet it's so realistic for someone living in LA and/or the Valley. I heart Katia and I'm looking forward to her later interactions with Carts.

Plus the Taylor Stewart thing... I may try that the next time I go to a Flyers game. I have the boobs to pull it off lol.

Why do you write don't google , that makes me even more curious.

This is a really cool story, I love the idea of her being a Polish immigrant girl who's a virgin and writes porn scripts, LOL. And if she gets with Carts this is going to be so interesting. Can't wait to read more

I'm really excited for this. The porn scripts thing really surprised me lol. I love how you are going into great detail about the character; it's really great.

Yay! Can't wait, subscribed. This is going to be awesome. Moar Carter fic.