I Feel a Sin Comin' On - Comments

Really fucking good!!!! jesus christ I couldn't stop reading and I wish there was more ahahaha I loved it!!

@ AJ9
I completely agree with you.

and as for this... just it was was amazing. And I'll be honest. It was the title that caught my attention, because I really love that fucking song. And I will never listen to it the same way again. I will probably be picturing this story every time. Just holy shit!!!

I freaking loooooooove this!! Everything about this is fantastic, amazing, hot, sexy, awesome!

I love the way that Brian talks, he really is such a ladies man! It's almost as though he's a bartender from the thirties or something like that, I love his little nickname for her 'toot's. It's my favourite of them all!
Oooh awkward meeting the ex while you're bumming a smoke off of another guy. Oops! But, it's a good enough ice breaker to start fucking the brains out of another guy- and when that guys happens to be Brian, why say no?

Like Rach said, you write Brian so well, and I love the way you've characterized him. You've done a brilliant job, thank you for entering my contest!

Damn! So good! You write Brian so well, makes him believable. I agree, you should write more about these two. :D

It was fantastic!! . I wouldn't mind you writing a sequel to this or turning it into a full length story. If you wanted to, that is.... I hope you do though