Sweet and Sour - Comments

I love how soft this story is. It's sweet and almost cuddly despite the fact you never even mentioned a couch. Your imagery is absolutely awesome and you've got their mannerisms down to a science. You, Ducky, are going on my watch list.(: <3

Being able to understand the character relationships without having paid too much attention to the show really rocks. I love that your stories stand alone, because otherwise I would've been completely lost. I know who Finn and Marceline are, but everyone else is a stranger to me. Haha.

I really like that Marceline was able to soothe her, and be a good friend. Even though the princess didn't feel as if no one else was her friend, you could tell she felt like the vampire really understood her better than anyone else. Friendships are a big part of what Adventure Time is about, so being able to see that theme here kicks ass.

Also, seriously, the way she blushes in the end is too much to take. So cute.

I really liked it. I liked how I could understand it without knowing the show because I've only watched it about once. What stood out to me the most was the layout! I really loved it.

I really liked it. I liked how I could understand it without knowing the show because I've only watched it about once. What stood out to me the most was the layout! I really loved it.