Good-bye, My Love. - Comments

I got here from comment swap. Firstly, I really like your writing style! It's very easy to read and it flows well. I think the plot is solid and you've written it very well. I absolutely love how you describe thing, you make it seem so real. Good job!

*Comment Swap*
I want to say first that your descriptions are great! I could picture everything in my mind, and I like how you described how the character was feeling! It was sad, but I like that she got the nerve to walk away! Your layout looks good, and your writing style is solid!